It's a good start, but a bit unprofessional. Part of it is what you're selling - graphics that're animated like that tend to be very unpopular. Also, the bright colors and lack of decoration other than minimal BBcode makes it seem like there's little effort put into the shop. I'd also recommend spreading out your layout in more than just three posts, especially if you've reserved the whole first page.
But it's definitely a very good jumping point. Might I recommend Djubre's guide?
Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:30 pm
7/10. Reasonable prices and fairly good graphics, but the thread itself doesn't have much decoration and isn't very eye-catching. If you had an awesome thread layout, the rating would definitely be 9 or 10/10 :]