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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 4:38 pm
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 6:29 pm
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 6:42 pm
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I think this one is my best, due to it's complex rhyming scheme.
"Simply said, I'm getting ahead. I'm living instead of sitting in bed, and wishing I said the things in my head. The dream to get bread. The means to be fed. And you know I'd rather be dead, together we stand, to whether the wind. Intelligent men, in resonance with the beautiful music that Relevant's in. I'm better than men that resides with lies for nickles and dimes, in these fickle times. It's old, It's tired, like Michelin Guy. I'm fixin' to find, the mission that lies, in visions of mind. These writtens of mine, I'm spittin' is fire, so listen so I, can insegeon ya' mind. Give vision to blind, inclined to vibe to this system of mine. You listenin'? I....brake limits when spittin' the illest of lines. So fly, I live in the sky, and rise, in time, you fixin' to find. The minute i rise, the villians'll die, who prison the rights, of innocent lives. So little I try, but givin' the time?, I'd christen divine invincible rhymes. Sick ignorant eyes insistin' religion's constrictin' existence to thrive in this life. So witness this scriptin' of light, when I write, and killin' existence of strife, with a knife. Confliction arise, from ill will derived, from feelin' I'm still, the illest alive. My glistenin' eyes, reveal what's real and heal the children dependent on I."
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 6:45 pm
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 7:09 pm
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iHallucinate Youn Flo Idk. I think my best verse was "You thought that was cold? Call me the whole damn freezer If your lyrics were my wife then you could call me a wife beater." -Youn Flo Man, that's good but I've seen you come up with better lines.
Which ones do you think were better?
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 7:16 pm
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 7:17 pm
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 7:30 pm
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 2:34 pm
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 8:14 pm
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S0_Amazing iHallucinate Idk but this line is good. I mean you've had better flow but its good content there. > Flo is a bad flow rejector and your lyrics are making me sick Hallucinate is fruitier than a box of trix ... confused honestly the wife beater line was iller... this was simple... as ********... flo's gone WAY harder than this
Say So what do you think was one of my illest verses?
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 7:03 am
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 5:15 pm
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 8:04 pm
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S0_Amazing iHallucinate Idk but this line is good. I mean you've had better flow but its good content there. > Flo is a bad flow rejector and your lyrics are making me sick Hallucinate is fruitier than a box of trix ... confused honestly the wife beater line was iller... this was simple... as ********... flo's gone WAY harder than this -Agreed ; but it ain't even a verse .
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 8:07 pm
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MC Relevant I think this one is my best, due to it's complex rhyming scheme.
"Simply said, I'm getting ahead. I'm living instead of sitting in bed, and wishing I said the things in my head. The dream to get bread. The means to be fed. And you know I'd rather be dead, together we stand, to whether the wind. Intelligent men, in resonance with the beautiful music that Relevant's in. I'm better than men that resides with lies for nickles and dimes, in these fickle times. It's old, It's tired, like Michelin Guy. I'm fixin' to find, the mission that lies, in visions of mind. These writtens of mine, I'm spittin' is fire, so listen so I, can insegeon ya' mind. Give vision to blind, inclined to vibe to this system of mine. You listenin'? I....brake limits when spittin' the illest of lines. So fly, I live in the sky, and rise, in time, you fixin' to find. The minute i rise, the villians'll die, who prison the rights, of innocent lives. So little I try, but givin' the time?, I'd christen divine invincible rhymes. Sick ignorant eyes insistin' religion's constrictin' existence to thrive in this life. So witness this scriptin' of light, when I write, and killin' existence of strife, with a knife. Confliction arise, from ill will derived, from feelin' I'm still, the illest alive. My glistenin' eyes, reveal what's real and heal the children dependent on I."
Holy shid . Must took a while to write that ? Caus' damn . I wouldn't ever come up with them lines . LOL Love the flow of it ; it's hella sick .
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