Silver Nephil
http://silver-nephil.deviantart.com/#/d2qtj2i
There's one of mine. *braces self for critique*
You need to work a lot more on the art.
I spend time writing this so you better read it XP
A few bad points:
~hands
~hair
~Face
~hair
~Also body pose. the person looks like it has a hump on its back D:
Tips:
~hands: try practicing with simple hand poses (like a "hi" or curled up hand a.k.a fist)
~face- go look at some face poses/structures from mangas or Anime (or you own)
~ Body poses- Ok this might sound weird but i even do this (sometimes) Pose in a mirror or something how you want the drawing/character to stand like,etc. (also look at your hands how they look and face.)
Sorry if you take it the bad way im just saying my opinion
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