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Nega-Cupid

PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 7:36 am


Yay I finnally get to post my drawings on Gaia...now all I need is the public peoples to tell me what needs work! Im actually very desprate for a few critques!! So please do 3nodding
Heres my line arts

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and my colored ones
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and I didnt do anything to this one

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Ive also wanted to try realism....you know just cause I dont wanna do anime all the time...it does get old doing it all the time ya know.
this one is my first dog...it was supposed to look a dachshund but everyone says she looks like a young beagle.
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and my moms plant...no clue of what kind it is.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:06 am
well all your faces are kind of...pointed but other than that its good!  

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:41 pm
I really like your art, it has a unique style to it 3nodding
The realism stuff looks really good too, Looks to me you're better at animals~

In the anime picture of the guy I noticed his face is a bit too pointed as nuj stated.. and the first girl's shoulders could be extended out a bit more in my opinion, but they all look good none the less~ ^^  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:57 am
ooh i like the color ones and the pencil drawings the most!  

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:28 pm
I think just work a little on the faces and hair and you will be good to go! heart  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:18 pm
there chins are to large and pointy!! work on drawing round faces and make the pointy chins smaller !! but besides that the way you draw the eyes clothes and hair is excellent. and I love the dog and the plant you drew heart  

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:32 am
The dog is very cute. heart  
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:59 am
bstar955
there chins are to large and pointy!! work on drawing round faces and make the pointy chins smaller !! but besides that the way you draw the eyes clothes and hair is excellent. and I love the dog and the plant you drew heart
I agree. especially with the dog & plant part.  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 8:43 pm
The anatomy is a little wonky, but besides that it's alright. heart  
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