*Ardiendo "Asher" Aparato (A_L)

[Disshin some Isshin]

Name: Ardiendo Aparato

Aliases/ Nicknames: Asher

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Physical Description: Ardiendo, Asher, is about five foot nine inches, a tad shorter than most but has a fit build to make up for it. Asher has more of an endurance body, something built for long distance running or out performing others. He has short dark-brown hair that is styled in a formal style. He wears a straw hat over his head, and smokes out of a pipe. The hollow mask covers over his eyes, limiting his sight. His are most of the time blood-shot red from smoking out of his pipe. It's pot.

Zanpaktou's Spirit and Name: Dueño

Sealed Form: Surprisingly, Dueño's true forms is the pipe that As he carries around. It is black and has been detailed in an orange design. This is a deceptive form because most all sealed forms are some sort of weapon.

Resurreccion

First Stage: Asher takes a large hit from his pipe, Dueño, and then flips is over and taps it, ashing it out, following this is the release command, "What is the mission, Dueño?"

The hollow mask covers all of Asher's face and creates a white sealed mask. There are no apparent holes, but this is only for looks, on the inside it is transparent. His garments covering most of his body burn away and reveal a white outfit much like most Arrancar but with the sleeves cut away. Fire expels from Dueño and it turns bright and extends out into a sword. Out of his back come several cylindrical pipes that expel flame and smoke. This fire is hotter than most anything and the smoke is thick.

Second Stage: Not yet achieved.

Special Accessories: Choko - Choko is the name of one of his swords. It is a double-bladed katana. It has a dark green hilt and scabbard, but the blade has a strip of dark green that seems to line the middle of the side of the blade. The strip is merely for decoration. The sword is finely crafted and looked as if it would represent a Zanpaktou, it is just a weapon though.

Skills: Asher was a triathlete in his past life, so endurance and stamina were his key skills. Asher is an exceptional swordmaster as well. His main method of combat is avoiding and wearing out the opponent until they and strike 'em while they're down. He likes to get into his opponents heads.

Abilities: Asher has trained himself to work without the gift of sight merely for recreational for training and to be independent from sight, increasing his other senses. This is a combat method to get the opponent to believe that they are blind. Other than his eye-sight trick, Asher seems to never tire, not even after days, while he was human it was never this extreme but due to his Arrancar additions, he seems to never tire.

Personality: Asher is a calculated person, he is all about statistics, he isn't brilliant by any means, but he just likes to remember statistics and numbers, another means of getting into an opponents head. Asher is also straight and to the point, he found it useless out of combat to toy around and never get something done. His voice is raspy at best and gives a dark feeling to any mood.

Biography/History: Asher was the age of twenty three when he died. It was during the summer and he had been training for a large marathon for the past several years. Wanting to achieve more than anyone else, he ran every day, but always during the day, never in the dark shroud of the late evening. On one particular night, he had a date with a girl about his age that would soon be his fiancé, however that was on written into his life path, but it was not completed. His date ran late and he had forgotten to fit his daily run into his schedule. Thinking of the most reasonable solution, Asher decided to make his run during the night, not something he normally did. This was a big mistake. During his run, he took his normal turn in the park, into the wooded area thick with trees. Out of nowhere, he was shot in the ankles and fell to his feet where two men came out from the shrouded area. They both had guns and were apparently part of some drug mob, somehow, Asher seemed to resemble a man who used to be loyal to the mod. Without hesitation, the two men put Asher to his knees and stood side by side and shot him in both eyes, creating a bullet path that would pierce his brain and kill him instantly. Soon afterwards, Asher found himself as a hollow and surviving much easier than others, avoiding all sorts of danger and outracing all threats. This is where Asher learned of his abilities.


*Aether_Lyre  

[Hymn of the Silent]

Well for the most part it looks alright, and you can keep it the way it is, you either need to expound further on your first release or add a little more to it.

You have a couple vague things like the surrounding flame and the smoke/fire pumps on your back.

Does the aura of fire persist throughout, or just during the actual release?

What does the sword look like? What type is it, does it do anything?

And, just a suggestion myself, I'd make sure those pipes on your back just do something instead of just sit there and pump out fire and smoke.

And if those pipes actually did something at some point, it's best to mention it. Because, at this point, it doesn't exactly look like you could hold up in a fight against most with abilities. Give yourself some strength or speed bonuses, and it might be good. I'm just looking out for you, because if it's not in the profile you don't get it in battle.


And if you're going to have a Segunda Epta, either let us know that you plan on having one (even just telling us that it's under construction), or just say you don't have one. Helps people clear up. And, as I learned, you don't get to keep it secret, as much as I tried.