Ensomniac(waiting for approval)

[I Enso I]

Name:Gabriel
Aliases/Nicknames:Ensomniac,Enso(i know Ensomniac is spelled with an I).


Age:16 Death:3rd of August.

Zanpaktou's spirit&name:Ishimaru.

Zanpaktou:
Wields Double Blades.

Shikai Releash:Ririsu(Releash) Ishimaru!.

Shikai:not Acheived.

Bankai:not Acheived.

Special Accesories:none.

Skills:seeking,finding.

Abilities:Manipulation of the moonlight.

Personality:Carefree,lazy,flirtatious.

Biography:Grew up a lonely person or rather he liked to be alone,even though most people wanted too get to know him.
he died a lonely death.

Signature/patented technique:none as of yet.

Guild status:member.

Online Availibility:whenever i can.  

[Diaku]

Need you to fill out the shikai and bankai so we know you aren't just making stuff up please. No to the shadow manipulation ability. I gotta say I am a bit disappointed on the personality and bio which are pretty basic.

For future reference it's Bankai not Benkai.  

[SpokenSoftly]

Add a description for the Shikai and Bankai, please find a different picture if you can since Shinigami don't have wings (unless I'm missing something major about Bleach or unless this is secretly a Death Note guild and I'm missing the joke...). 'Manipulation of the moonlight' is both vague and not possible for a new character, since that would fall under the category of a 'special technique' instead of an 'ability.' Some minor innate power, like heat resistance or something similar, would be more appropriate for the 'Abilities' line.

Fix the grammar and punctuation on both the Personality and Bio sections, you need to clean those up and show some sort of attempt at making a halfway-decent bio.  

[Daddy the Father]

Fix up the Bankai and Shikai.
Shikai Abilities
Bankai Abilities
Bio and personality....FIX IT!!!  

[SpokenSoftly]

Let's not restate it a fourth time until he's had a chance to fix it.