Critique my art please?

[Refia Hinotori]

I have a few examples on my profile, but can anyone tell me if I can improve on anything?

I want to better myself.  

[Pixeliciousness]

The pastel colors are good, though the characters themselves aren't posed very dynamically, which makes the sexy feel sort of non existant.

I would suggest getting a simple art editing program, oc canvas or whatever, to adjust the saturation and white point on your work to make them a little more vivid.


Also titties aren't that ...bloby. More solid, even if their all flabby flappy.

Otherwise good, nice proportions, consistant work. Better then what plenty of folk here sell.  

[Guaif]

I have to agree, your artwork is quite good. Much better then what I normally see. Surprisingly its furry. Not many artists do that. And those that do, could use some practice. Although yes, poses can definitely be worked on. But seeing your gallery, I'm sure that it'll come with ease to you.  

[Refia Hinotori]

Thank you both for the constructive criticism.

I'm looking into more poses for actualt sex scenes, but for right now I'm still doing pin-ups.

I'll give it a shot.^^  

[Pixeliciousness]

Danburo should have whatcha need.  

[Guaif]

How much are your commissions?  

[Refia Hinotori]

Bohemian Hybrid

How much are your commissions?

Right now on Gaia I'm charging 50K since I'm using natural resources I have to pay for.

If you are intrested, I'll finish my current project and add you to my list. : >  

[Guaif]

That'd be awesome. Yes, please do. Oh and may I ask what your current project is?  

[Refia Hinotori]

Bohemian Hybrid

That'd be awesome. Yes, please do. Oh and may I ask what your current project is?

I'll be happy to add you.
And you'll be second on my list.
I'll send you a PM of the things you need.

Right now I'm doing a potrait of a human couple back to back.
Boy and girl.