FallnFeather/16/Tell me what you think

[FallnFeather]

So I had to draw a manga from Japanese class and I just wanted to know what anyone thought. :] All lyrics belong to Sonata Arctica. Translations are in the comments and below the page link.
Page 1
"If you fall...
I'll catch."
Page 2
"If you love..
I'll love.
And so it goes my dear.."
Page 3
"Don't be scared.
You'll be safe.
This I swear."
Page 4
"If you'll only love me back."


Hope you like it, tell me what you think, all comments are welcomed ;D~.  

[Midoriwa]

Very lovely! I am in love with how clean and simple the lines are.  

[-Skye Shard-]

=O I envy you.
Very nice work!  

[FallnFeather]

Oh wow. Thank you much ^~^.
Both of you <3.  

[Midoriwa]

Definitely have added you to my watch list.  

[-Skye Shard-]

Same. ^.^  

[Jutzu GT]

I love it. It's awesome how you can draw two faces together. Keep it up! 4laugh
I wish I could read japanese~