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"Miracle" She was so young back then; she’s older and much more mature now. Let me take you way back before now when it all changed.
There was once a happy family who lived in an old town called Greensbury. Their daughter’s name was Sophie. Her mother, Amy, was a teacher. Sophie’s dad, Joe, worked as an actor in a theatre. But Sophie wanted to spend time with her parents; they never had the time. One day, she got really sick and her parents had an important conference that day. When her temperature dropped, her parents decided to leave Sophie alone hoping that when they got back, she’d be better. They were wrong.
When Joe, Sophie’s dad, got back, there lay Sophie in the snow unconscious. Then they realized that they had made the wrong decision leaving Sophie alone at home. Sophie had waited for them and became even more sick. Immediately, Amy and Joe called the ambulance. They waited and waited and waited, praying that their sick, weak daughter was going to live. Later, the doctor (along with the ambulance) arrived at their house. After examining Sophie, the doctor shaking his head sadly said, “I’m sorry, Mr. and Mrs. Jonas. Your daughter has become very sick that there’s a very good chance that she might not live.”
“No, no, no, no! Sophie……” cried Amy, sobbing with her hands to her face. Then Joe bolted out of the house, not looking where he was going. He ended up in a dark, foggy forest. It was cold and chilly too. In a way, the forest reminded Joe of his sick, weary daughter, fighting for her life back at the hospital. He fell down on his knees and started to pray and cry out, “ God, please help my poor, sick daughter! Please, let her live!” Just then a bright, holy light started to shine out of the sky, all of the dark clouds and fog disappearing. When Joe returned back home, Sophie was in bed, smiling and talking to her mother. He ran and hugged the both of them. All of them in one piece. It was a true miracle. Together as one happy, thankful family.
After that, Amy and Joe both quit their jobs and together opened up a hat shop at home. Sometimes Sophie would help out too. Amy and Joe never left Sophie alone after that like they used to. But like I said, Sophie’s much older now. Sophie doesn’t remember anything about it though. She shouldn’t have to know what her parents went through that day or herself. They’ve still been a happy, close family then.
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CobaltSDragon "Miracle" She was so young back then; she’s older and much more mature now. Let me take you way back before now when it all changed. There was once a happy family who lived in an old town called Greensbury. Their daughter’s name was Sophie. Her mother, Amy, was a teacher. Sophie’s dad, Joe, worked as an actor in a theatre. But Sophie wanted to spend time with her parents; they never had the time. One day, she got really sick and her parents had an important conference that day. When her temperature dropped, her parents decided to leave Sophie alone hoping that when they got back, she’d be better. They were wrong. When Joe, Sophie’s dad, got back, there lay Sophie in the snow unconscious. Then they realized that they had made the wrong decision leaving Sophie alone at home. Sophie had waited for them and became even more sick. Immediately, Amy and Joe called the ambulance. They waited and waited and waited, praying that their sick, weak daughter was going to live. Later, the doctor (along with the ambulance) arrived at their house. After examining Sophie, the doctor shaking his head sadly said, “I’m sorry, Mr. and Mrs. Jonas. Your daughter has become very sick that there’s a very good chance that she might not live.” “No, no, no, no! Sophie……” cried Amy, sobbing with her hands to her face. Then Joe bolted out of the house, not looking where he was going. He ended up in a dark, foggy forest. It was cold and chilly too. In a way, the forest reminded Joe of his sick, weary daughter, fighting for her life back at the hospital. He fell down on his knees and started to pray and cry out, “ God, please help my poor, sick daughter! Please, let her live!” Just then a bright, holy light started to shine out of the sky, all of the dark clouds and fog disappearing. When Joe returned back home, Sophie was in bed, smiling and talking to her mother. He ran and hugged the both of them. All of them in one piece. It was a true miracle. Together as one happy, thankful family. After that, Amy and Joe both quit their jobs and together opened up a hat shop at home. Sometimes Sophie would help out too. Amy and Joe never left Sophie alone after that like they used to. But like I said, Sophie’s much older now. Sophie doesn’t remember anything about it though. She shouldn’t have to know what her parents went through that day or herself. They’ve still been a happy, close family then. THE END Good Job Cabots! It makes me think of this extremely boring book I read, not that yours is boring, it has a similar plot. There's this girl and she has polio and the nurse says that she's going to die. Her parents ask her what she wants and she says that she wants a chocolate milkshake, but milkshakes aren't good for people with polio and could increase the chance that the girl will die. Her parents got her the chocolate milkshake anyway and it improved her condition. Anyway Good Luck! I was thinking of writing a story too, but I don't know what to write about now. O and BTW I think that you were supposed to PM it to him.
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fizzyorangesoda CobaltSDragon "Miracle" She was so young back then; she’s older and much more mature now. Let me take you way back before now when it all changed. There was once a happy family who lived in an old town called Greensbury. Their daughter’s name was Sophie. Her mother, Amy, was a teacher. Sophie’s dad, Joe, worked as an actor in a theatre. But Sophie wanted to spend time with her parents; they never had the time. One day, she got really sick and her parents had an important conference that day. When her temperature dropped, her parents decided to leave Sophie alone hoping that when they got back, she’d be better. They were wrong. When Joe, Sophie’s dad, got back, there lay Sophie in the snow unconscious. Then they realized that they had made the wrong decision leaving Sophie alone at home. Sophie had waited for them and became even more sick. Immediately, Amy and Joe called the ambulance. They waited and waited and waited, praying that their sick, weak daughter was going to live. Later, the doctor (along with the ambulance) arrived at their house. After examining Sophie, the doctor shaking his head sadly said, “I’m sorry, Mr. and Mrs. Jonas. Your daughter has become very sick that there’s a very good chance that she might not live.” “No, no, no, no! Sophie……” cried Amy, sobbing with her hands to her face. Then Joe bolted out of the house, not looking where he was going. He ended up in a dark, foggy forest. It was cold and chilly too. In a way, the forest reminded Joe of his sick, weary daughter, fighting for her life back at the hospital. He fell down on his knees and started to pray and cry out, “ God, please help my poor, sick daughter! Please, let her live!” Just then a bright, holy light started to shine out of the sky, all of the dark clouds and fog disappearing. When Joe returned back home, Sophie was in bed, smiling and talking to her mother. He ran and hugged the both of them. All of them in one piece. It was a true miracle. Together as one happy, thankful family. After that, Amy and Joe both quit their jobs and together opened up a hat shop at home. Sometimes Sophie would help out too. Amy and Joe never left Sophie alone after that like they used to. But like I said, Sophie’s much older now. Sophie doesn’t remember anything about it though. She shouldn’t have to know what her parents went through that day or herself. They’ve still been a happy, close family then. THE END Good Job Cabots! It makes me think of this extremely boring book I read, not that yours is boring, it has a similar plot. There's this girl and she has polio and the nurse says that she's going to die. Her parents ask her what she wants and she says that she wants a chocolate milkshake, but milkshakes aren't good for people with polio and could increase the chance that the girl will die. Her parents got her the chocolate milkshake anyway and it improved her condition. Anyway Good Luck! I was thinking of writing a story too, but I don't know what to write about now. O and BTW I think that you were supposed to PM it to him.
Thanks fizzy! Yeah I did PM him but he didn't respond yet.......
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CobaltSDragon fizzyorangesoda CobaltSDragon "Miracle" She was so young back then; she’s older and much more mature now. Let me take you way back before now when it all changed. There was once a happy family who lived in an old town called Greensbury. Their daughter’s name was Sophie. Her mother, Amy, was a teacher. Sophie’s dad, Joe, worked as an actor in a theatre. But Sophie wanted to spend time with her parents; they never had the time. One day, she got really sick and her parents had an important conference that day. When her temperature dropped, her parents decided to leave Sophie alone hoping that when they got back, she’d be better. They were wrong. When Joe, Sophie’s dad, got back, there lay Sophie in the snow unconscious. Then they realized that they had made the wrong decision leaving Sophie alone at home. Sophie had waited for them and became even more sick. Immediately, Amy and Joe called the ambulance. They waited and waited and waited, praying that their sick, weak daughter was going to live. Later, the doctor (along with the ambulance) arrived at their house. After examining Sophie, the doctor shaking his head sadly said, “I’m sorry, Mr. and Mrs. Jonas. Your daughter has become very sick that there’s a very good chance that she might not live.” “No, no, no, no! Sophie……” cried Amy, sobbing with her hands to her face. Then Joe bolted out of the house, not looking where he was going. He ended up in a dark, foggy forest. It was cold and chilly too. In a way, the forest reminded Joe of his sick, weary daughter, fighting for her life back at the hospital. He fell down on his knees and started to pray and cry out, “ God, please help my poor, sick daughter! Please, let her live!” Just then a bright, holy light started to shine out of the sky, all of the dark clouds and fog disappearing. When Joe returned back home, Sophie was in bed, smiling and talking to her mother. He ran and hugged the both of them. All of them in one piece. It was a true miracle. Together as one happy, thankful family. After that, Amy and Joe both quit their jobs and together opened up a hat shop at home. Sometimes Sophie would help out too. Amy and Joe never left Sophie alone after that like they used to. But like I said, Sophie’s much older now. Sophie doesn’t remember anything about it though. She shouldn’t have to know what her parents went through that day or herself. They’ve still been a happy, close family then. THE END Good Job Cabots! It makes me think of this extremely boring book I read, not that yours is boring, it has a similar plot. There's this girl and she has polio and the nurse says that she's going to die. Her parents ask her what she wants and she says that she wants a chocolate milkshake, but milkshakes aren't good for people with polio and could increase the chance that the girl will die. Her parents got her the chocolate milkshake anyway and it improved her condition. Anyway Good Luck! I was thinking of writing a story too, but I don't know what to write about now. O and BTW I think that you were supposed to PM it to him. Thanks fizzy! Yeah I did PM him but he didn't respond yet.......
Read the post I made earlier.
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