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Baine Oritaga

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:38 pm


Character Information

Name- Baine Oritaga
Nickname- Baine The Gray
Age (Appearance)- 22
Actual Age- 2000
Birth-date- 9/6
Squad- (once approved)
Rank- (once approved)
Reitsu Color- Gray

Appearance

Eye Color- Red
Hair Color- crimson red
Hair Description- Long wavy and luxurious crimson red hair that flows like a river of blood.
Height- 6'7"
Weight- 250lbs
Markings- a large swastika scar on his back
Description- User Image
A tall built figure that has perfect muscle tone. He always wears his signature red armored breastplate with armored shoulder pieces. His pants are long red slacks held up with a blue sash. At the bottom of the pants the torn well worn bottom meats the gray with red spotted tabi that weren't always red spotted. He wears the standard straw sandals. He also dons some ashingaru armored gauntlets that are the same color red as his armor. Over the top of his armor is a long white jacket with torn off sleeves. It has a tattered worn bottom just like his pants. He has no sheathe for his sword so he usually just slides it into his sash.
Extra- Always has a small dirk known as a Dragon fang dagger

Personality

Relationships- None
Description- Hot headed, quick to act and very temperamental
Likes- meditation, solitude, sake, swordplay and combat
Dislikes- crowds, training, reading, and meetings

Zanpakuto

Spirit's Name- Severence
Sealed Appearance- User Image
The sword handle is as black as coal and is 18 inches long. the hilt is a silver polished piece that has intricate detailings in it that look like its for a showpiece. There are crimson blades protruding from both sides that are as sharp as the main blade. The blade itself is 5 ft. long and is crimson and has a slight curve to it that's more defined that a normal sword.
Spirit's Description- User Image
A giant silver humanoid dragon that has fiery red eyes and smoke protruding from his mouth at all times.
Shikai Release Phrase-Resurrect Sev
Shikai Description- User Image
The sword becomes a great sword and changes to a completely silver sword. The handle is 20 in. long and the blade becomes 6ft. long and looks like it would weigh a ton but its as light as a feather and the handle has a design near its hilt that looks like a skeleton and it has two bone hilt guards protruding from it.
Abilities- Reality bending- bends reality to create a clone of ones self. Chaotic Slash- Sends a wave of energy forth from the tip of the sword. Time slasher- the caster sends a energy wave through a portal that can sometimes hit the target at a perfect time ( its a russian rulette move)
Bankai Release Phase- Distort the world Silver Severance!
Bankai Description- User Image
The bonkai form coats the wielder in a black perma cloth that's as strong as steel. Then over the cloth some armor plates accent vital spots. inside some armor spots there is red accents. The sword becomes a standard sword with a black and red accented handle that is 12 in. long and the blade is silver and is 2 1/2 ft. long.
Abilities- Silent slivers- several small waves of energy are shot at a point and they can move and change direction. Silver Dragon Destroyer- A giant energy blast that looks like a giant silver dragon. (severe reshi drain and causes temporary paralysis)

Abilities

Sunido master, Kido adept and swordsmanship master

History

Human World- Baine was a samurai in life. When he was born he was taken from his mother and trained for the lord in witch his father owed a great deal of money too. As Baine grew he harbored hatred and a bloodlust in his heart. As Baine entered his first battle all he did was run into battle and killed without hesitation. He wound up killing soldiers on both sides from going into a blind rage. After his lord seeing the report he ordered Baine killed. The attempt failed and Baine went on the run for several years. Finally after 15 years the search was given up. At that point Baine had been under the employ of another rival lord and had solidified his legend as a Demon of the Fire. When his old lord found out both lords went to war. The war lasted several months until finally both lords betrayed Baine out of fear of rebellion. Baine had his head removed in his sleep and his body was dismembered and all his remains were burned and scattered across the four corners of japan.
Early Soul Society- As soon as Baine got to the soul society he saw a way to have solitude at last. For the first thousand years it seemed quiet and peaceful for Baine. It all ended in one night...It had started as a regular day for Baine, he was finishing his meditation when he saw some smoke coming from the direction of his small farm. When Baine got there some thugs had thought they could take it upon themselves to pillage and torch the place because they wanted all the supplies. When one of the thugs grabbed Baine he instantly reacted and took the guys sword and killed him. In that one moment everything he had worked so hard to repress came back like a river and Baine once again gave into his anger and killed the bandits. After the fact Baine then accepted his skills and set out for the soul reaper academy to see if he was worth being how he was or not...
In the 13 Court Guard Squads Baine started off as the lowest seat in squad 11. He had argued that he should have been at least a third seat but they placed him in last due to his aggressive nature and lack of control. Over the next three hundred years Baine slowly honed his anger and rage as to be able to work his way up the ranks. As he showed he could control his furry and bloodthirst he started gaining ranks. After a while Baine got tired of waiting for a good time to spar and he wound up getting sent to central 46 for killing several squad mates and nearly killing some innocent bystanders. All because Baine went into a rage once the third seat called off the mach just for some girl. After spendin 500 years in a cell Baine came back out and sees everything in a different tone. All he wants is to try and rejoin his old squad and start anew.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 5:15 pm


Your descriptions of your background are sorely lacking. You're trying to tell a story here, not give a brief 3 second overview. This is supposed to reflect, at least partly, what we'll be seeing from you as a role player so spend a bit more time and expand the background.

Now as for your sword it's a bit... insanely overpowered. I mean a shikai that controls reality itself (even if in a small area that's still a bit absurd)? That's hundreds of times stronger than even a bankai should be.
Now as for your bankai I needn't say how ridiculously overpowered this is either, I'll just quote the bit that shows it will never be accepted "inside the dimension Baine is god and all who enter are under his mercy"....

No God modding, being God kind of hints you'll be God modding.

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Baine Oritaga

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:49 pm


okay edited history and edited powers.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:20 am


Add a text description to all of your description.

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Baine Oritaga

PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:11 pm


edited...
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