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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:26 pm
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AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM
art done by kotalee
Name: Nessa Nicknames: none yet Gender:Female Age: 16
Faction: GHOSTS Race:Troll Common Desc: Natural Ability:
Personality: ♦Shy & has a bit of Social anxiety ~especially in new situations & with unfamiliar people. ►Her shyness comes a lot from the fear of what other people will think of her behavior, so she gets scared of doing or saying what she wants to, out of fear of negative reactions, criticism, or rejection. ♦She will have very light conversations & does well with small talk, till she warms up to people & gets comfortable with her surroundings. ♦Can get overwhelmed easily when she's in big crowds which can cause her to become frustrated. ♦Usually blends in with the crowd till she gets a feeling for what is going on. ► Most of the time she will probably be found in a corner "people watching." ♦She is a hard worker & can get stuff done when it needs to be if it's something major/important. When it comes to little stuff she can be lazy & doesn't really care that there is a little mess around here once in awhile. >Every once in awhile she'll come out of her shell & relax so she still has room to grow & maybe one day break out of her shyness & anxiety she just needs a bit of help. >Animal lover >Favorite Colors: Purple, blue, black, silver >Favorite Music: Pretty much listens to anything >Favorite Literature: Fiction mostly >Hobbies: Arts & craft type of things, she can't draw but likes to doodle, collecting things that interest her or just stuff she find cute, likes to do puzzles, play games, watch tv. >How do they spend a rainy day? Sleep... or any of her hobbies.
Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? With no recollection of she ended up in Halloweentown she wondered around for a while and came across the academy, she thought it would be away to fill her day and experience new things even though it may be out of her comfort zone.
FEAR Ability: Cold spots ~ will suck energy in making you feel overly tired or depressed. Fear mechanics= The Mind: Lowers opponent’s accuracy; makes it harder for them to hit you.
Cold spots Cranky ghosts occasionally suck energy in from their locality, creating what is known in the spook hunting community as "cold spots". "(If) you are feeling overly tired or depressed, wanting to keep your drapes and shades drawn and be in the dark, and you are feeling withdrawn and tired all the time, with no good reason, you may be having your energy being sapped by an attention craving ghost."
Physical Description:
Eye Colour:blue/teal Hair Colour/Style:blonde with dark purple streaks running through that almost glow about shoulder length in a ponytail. Skin Colour:grayish/pale purple Clothing Style/Colours: Classic Goth inspired, lots of black with some touches of purple and silver. has a silver belt, necklace silver/black no ribbon thingy Shirt the arms part is a little transparent/sheer Pants something like this but with the wraps a darkish purple Boots something like this with the laces white/silver and the tongue part a dark purple Extra: She has a head that is almost alien type looking with swirl tattoos around her eyes and forehead The texture of her skin is something like this her ears are kind of trollish like with a few notches taken out of them, she has kind of a jagged toothy fang like smile.
References: feel free to change everything and anything as to the fact that i can't draw and have no clue how to position her to look normal and make her head so it doesn't look all funky. I'm not to picky as to how her stance or anything is as long as it doesn't look like what I drew.
My Crappy Concept
Other art done for ideas by other lovely ppl. one two three four five
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:26 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:27 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:28 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2012 4:49 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2012 4:53 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2012 12:51 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2012 7:57 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2012 4:37 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2012 4:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:51 pm
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Hello there~ you requested crit so here is some crit yay! biggrin
The one thing that jumps out at me is that her specific species - slimer - doesn't seem to really match her appearance very much! Slimers don't have very set forms, it is true, but I would be inclined to go with another subspecies for her based on her appearance. I'm assuming that you definitely want to keep her as a ghost... perhaps have her be a ghost of some other species, like a ghost troll (since you mentioned trollish ears and trolls can be fangy) or a different species that you like? We have ghost dragons, ghost dogs, ghost lots of things! Just something to consider. biggrin
(And if you aren't absolutely set on ghost, with those fangs, I'd almost be inclined to suggest undead/vampire.)
Also, for her personality - this will not in ANY WAY stop her from being approved should you get her as a character, but for your own thinking about - most of what's there is all about her shyness/anxiety. You've put a lot of thoughts into the facets of that and what it means for her, but at the same time that's really only one aspect of her character! I would encourage you to develop that out some more, beyond the shyness - find who she is underneath all of that. Go deeper~!
I hope that's helpful, even a little. owo
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:14 pm
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Sosiqui Hello there~ you requested crit so here is some crit yay! biggrin The one thing that jumps out at me is that her specific species - slimer - doesn't seem to really match her appearance very much! Slimers don't have very set forms, it is true, but I would be inclined to go with another subspecies for her based on her appearance. I'm assuming that you definitely want to keep her as a ghost... perhaps have her be a ghost of some other species, like a ghost troll (since you mentioned trollish ears and trolls can be fangy) or a different species that you like? We have ghost dragons, ghost dogs, ghost lots of things! Just something to consider. biggrin (And if you aren't absolutely set on ghost, with those fangs, I'd almost be inclined to suggest undead/vampire.) Also, for her personality - this will not in ANY WAY stop her from being approved should you get her as a character, but for your own thinking about - most of what's there is all about her shyness/anxiety. You've put a lot of thoughts into the facets of that and what it means for her, but at the same time that's really only one aspect of her character! I would encourage you to develop that out some more, beyond the shyness - find who she is underneath all of that. Go deeper~! I hope that's helpful, even a little. owo I definitely want to keep her as a ghost especially now that i have an official student as a undead. But I love the idea of her being a ghost troll, it does work so much better with the appearance she has! I'll have to figure out a Natural Ability for her, since I'm pretty sure there wasn't anything about it in the other stuff .
Maybe I'll have to go back and kind of reread the event thing I was able to play her in, so i can take some stuff from there and play with it to add to her personality. Her personality seems to be the hardest thing for me to get down for some reason, with my new student he was simple because I already had a back story for him kind of as soon as i saw his art. Maybe it will will help to do a back story with her lol.
You where definitely helpful! smile good thing I have awhile to work on her to get all the kinks worked out.
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