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Cora Merle Seraph

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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2012 1:55 pm


	Had to write a 5-7 page 12 pt font double space primer on Islam for people who know little or nothing about Islam. So keep in mind the audience it is meant for. beyond that looking to tighten up and expand article and get ideas for sequel ones I suppose. Comment on DA if you got account other wise comment here on gaia!

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 8:14 pm


	Cora Merle Seraph ALLAH AHKBAR BOOM! OGOD WE GOD TERRORISTS OVAR HERE

Konan Resnekov

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Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2012 9:10 am


	I think it would behoove you to cite sources, as some of what is said here doesn't accord with Islamic history as I understand it, though that may simply reflect my own ignorance, hence, citing sources, especially ones that can be checked easily, may smooth over any apparent discrepancies. Beyond that, it just needs a good twice-over for spelling and grammatical errors, same as any other paper.