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PostPosted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 2:33 pm
I live through my dark existence
only to bask in your beauty
your eyes that shine like sapphires
your smile that brightens even my sad existence
I envy the wind that runs through your hair
that touches your lips
I long to touch you
to hold you in my arms but I cannot
for your heart belongs to another
so, I can only love you from afar
your friendship means more to me
than anything this world provides
but like an angel you touched my heart
in a way that I've never felt before
cause I've never known what love is until this day
I know that we are only friends
but my heart wishes it to be more
so I will still hope and dream
that one day I can feel your lips pressed to mine
to hold you in my arms and say, "I love you"
 
PostPosted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 2:47 pm
xFyRe
I live through my dark existence
only to bask in your beauty
your eyes that shine like sapphires
your smile that brightens even my sad existence
I envy the wind that runs through your hair
that touches your lips
I long to touch you
to hold you in my arms but I cannot
for your heart belongs to another
so, I can only love you from afar
your friendship means more to me
than anything this world provides
but like an angel you touched my heart
in a way that I've never felt before
cause I've never known what love is until this day
I know that we are only friends
but my heart wishes it to be more
so I will still hope and dream
that one day I can feel your lips pressed to mine
to hold you in my arms and say, "I love you"

I love it! So sweet ane kinda sad.  

lola_siannodel


kimika56

PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 7:35 am
le gasp! So sorrowful, so painful, so amazing! Where in the world did you learn to write like this? Oh, you're amazing, and the comparisons you make for this girl you love are amazing. Wonderful!!! *recieves many handclaps*  
PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 4:02 pm
I think that you've got the "Nice Guys Finish Last" blues. Most nice guys get em. The blues that occur because a girl can't see just how much you care for her, and even if she did she's already in a relationship. It's a very deeply emotional poem that you've written here, keep up the good work.  

I am Jaques colon

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