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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 4:15 pm
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AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM
Name: Charlotte Elise Danes Nicknames: Lotte Gender: Female Age: 16
Faction: Ghost Race: Mirror Spirit
Natural Ability: Lotte is able to utilize mirrors as portals, hopping from one location to the other as easily as walking through a doorway. This ability can only be used with mirrors within a certain radius of her. As of now she can pass through to any mirror within the same building that she has visited beforehand.
Personality: Although she may appear a bit ...off, Lotte is really a kind and inquisitive ghoul, albeit a bit whimsical. She is all manners and etiquette, having been the daughter of a distinguished noble in her past life. Though she remembers nothing about her life at the manor, she retains her strict upbringing. Her ghostly predicament has left her quite detached and she can often be found gliding listlessly down hallways lost in thought, perhaps wondering about her former life and the matters surrounding her death. This is how others usually find her, often leading them to assume that she is just another oddball to be left alone. However, those who approach her will find her pleasant, and she becomes fiercely loyal to those who snap her out of her reverie and keep her grounded in this afterlife.
Lotte absolutely hates dresses and skirts and refuses to wear anything she deems too ghouly. She was quite the tomboy during her time in the Human World, much to her parents dismay. Her desire to wear mens clothing is unhindered here in Halloweentown and her wardrobe is chock-full of fashionable menswear.
Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? A fairly new denizen of Halloweentown, Lotte naturally gravitated towards those similar to her (physical) age. The Academy seems like a perfect place to study and grow with the other students as she learns to be an independent ghoul.
FEAR Ability: Mirror Curse (The Mind) - Lotte temporarily becomes a mirrored reflection of the opponent, making them more prone to missing with their attacks.
Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Hair Colour/Style: Skin Colour: Clothing Style/Colours: (Remember, everything should be Halloween-inspired! Creepy is good!) Extra: (Your character's special features: wings, tail, pointy ears, fangs, whatever else that isn't covered above.) References: (If you have art or design sketches for your character, include them here!)
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 4:04 pm
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For her natural ability, having her able to portal hop is fine, but having the ability to go to any mirror in same building as well as adjacent ones is just a tad OP. Its minor nitpick but y1 mirror hop is same building only. Y2 would add in the additional buildings. Very minor, very simple fix.
Minor personality nitpicks. Avoid 'statements' that predetermine character interaction. "This is how others usually find her, leading them to assume that she is just another oddball to be left alone. However, those who approach her will find her pleasant," Vrs "This is how others usually find her, (which can lead)leading them to assume that she is just another oddball to be left alone. However, those who approach her will (might) find her pleasant,"
Really simple changes that allow a more open less 'ridged' profile.
Personality, try to answer 'who, what, where, when, why, and how' as to her personality. How is she kind, how is she inquisitive? When is she not pleasant? Why wouldn't she be? What makes her loyal? Her personality is good, but some simple QnA can help expand it.
FEAR: Think you'll need to rework this one ;u; Only reapers are allowed use of item weapons. Maybe her 'form' turns to a mirror of her target? Like, she reflects them/takes a mirror image of them and from that can get a boost to dodging/target missing hitting themselves?
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iStoleYurVamps
iStoleYurVamps
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Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2013 5:47 pm
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