my charater :P

[Pro Slap]

Name: Snow Blood
age: 15
looks: very small/Pure red eyes/ really long white hair
clothes: she usallys wheres a small shirt tht is black/and has bandages on arm and tail.
personalitys: fun/evil/nice/shy/quiet sometimes
bio: she is a really rare demon/monster she isnt a vampire. she is a yong yang demon which she has 2 people in one body.one is really evil and fun the other one is really kind,shy,and quiet. there personalitys switch often when she sees blood.
other looks: has black cat ears an tail/and has a collar around neck.
( u can find look of me of charater on google search for anime girl with red eyes and white hair and looks one tht looks like me)  

[Myoukin]

I may not be an expert at this, but I'd say there's a few things that are missing that you need for your character page, there's a guide to it Here

Primarily, you want to have [Q] in the thread title to signify it being a quest character, along with the name and subspecies and faction/species of your character with [crit] or something similar at the end to show you're looking for character critiques. Like this:

[Q] NAMEHERE the SUBSPECIES FACTION [Crits please]

Also, there's a specific form you can use to help figure out what people need to know, depending on what alliance your character's in (student/hunter/horseman/etc) that you can also find in the link I provided.

Hope that helps, and good luck~