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PostPosted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:55 pm
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AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: "Fifi" - N’Finity Deevinar
Nicknames: Fifi, N’Fi, Finny, Fin
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Faction: Demon
Race: Essence Demon - Venom




Natural Ability: Finny can switch between a much more human form and a demoness form -- Also, her demonic form is what is what she sees when looking into any mirror or if someone sees her reflection.

Key Personality Words Dreamer, Sensitive, Artistic, Introvert, and Kind

Personality: N’Fi is… conflicted.

She’s an awkward teenager – trying to fit in and deal with her shortcomings (Both real and imagined).

Talking about her family is something she avoids entirely because of her own inadequacies and the desire to fit in with other demons -- She's proud of her bloodline - and blames herself for not having what others have naturally/easily.

Around others she's slightly aloof -- a bit of an ice princess as it were. Detached because she doesn't want her reason for being at the Academy to become public, and also because with the lack of control she's liable to hurt someone; albeit unintentionally. If nothing else she could release a cloud of venom and have someone hallucinating while others watch.

An avid fan of fashion, she's constantly creating new accessories; especially unique gloves. It would nearly cause Fin physical pain to put on a uniform and not jazz it up at all with her own touches. (Luckily, that's not a problem so she can edit as she pleases) The best part of this is that she's able to create and explore her mind; to have a place where she can lose herself and lose all the baggage that she carries around with her, metaphorically. The downside to this is that when she immerses herself in the world of drawing and designing her guard is down and she's liable to be accidentally releasing her hallucinogens. Once she snaps back to herself she's again a 'failure.' Also; art makes her vulnerable -- if someone were to look at a sketch and dislike it that would be very personal attack even if just an impersonal difference in opinion.

If she's not sketching outfits, creating accessories, (and occasionally outfits; but those take a lot more time than just whipping together something for the fun of it) doing schoolwork, or attempting to develop more fighting skills; N'Fi tends to sit and daydream. -- Imagining what it will be like when she has mastered what she came to do.

Its not that she doesn't want friends, its that with the weight of the world (imagined) on her shoulders, an already day-dreamy personality has a hard time venturing forth and making friends. (Also; it's a downer to be day dreaming about having a fabulous fashion show and all of a sudden the people sitting within three feet of you are also imagining themselves there because of a lack of control)


Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Hoping to improve her magical skills and prove herself to her family, Finny has been sent to get ‘up to snuff’ or else she will end up being disowned.

FEAR Ability: Tainted Fang- she throws a small hallucinogenic cloud at her enemies.

Eventual:
Skin-to-skin contact can either make whoever Fin has touched very ill. If developed and worked at enough a touch can cause death. (At this point; highly unlikely ‘cuz a bit of a failure -- and completely impossible as a 1st year)

At will N’Fi can release a cloud of hallucinogenic gas. It’s very very briefly lived and typically causes pleasant hallucinations. – This is a very much beginner ‘trick’ for venom demons; others in her family have developed their own venom clouds to much larger scale/full attack – N’Fi’s has never developed -- Over time this /will/ become her attack -- she'll be able to throw clouds that (depending on her mood) will cause horrific hallucinations/cause the same poisoning that beginning level touching causes.

Don't forget to include what TYPE of Fear it is! For more information please see the FEAR guide: Tainted Fang


Physical Description:

Eye Colour: Green
Hair Colour/Style: Big, Big, Thick, Red, Super long
Skin Colour: Pale
Clothing Style/Colours: Feminine, Lacy, Proper; IMGs describe so much more fully than I can @__@
Extra: Her demon form – Barbed tail
References:

Favorite Reference, Human:: Missing gloves and horns - she'll wear those at all times (and obviously have horns constantly). /this is a more grown up appearance. Have barbed tail in her human form as well.

Younger appearance

Non-Human, demon venomous form—NSFW (mild nudity)

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 8:30 am
A couple of things!

- If you'd like her to have a human-looking form as well as a nonhuman form, that will need to be her natural ability. Since her demon form is already humanoid, her skull pin won't make her any more human-looking.

- Her FEAR ability, while it can work, sounds like it could be a little impractical; this is something she'll be using in battle, so requiring skin-to-skin contact could make things difficult for her. I would suggest adapting her venom cloud ability for her battle ability rather than her natural ability.  

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 8:17 pm
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Thankyouu x3

I've edited and I like that much more. XD
Feel like I'm fumbling with a first character.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 1:46 am
smile Good luck!  

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:21 pm
Event Quest Crits~

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Ability- I would condense this as just her having a humanoid form and a demon form. A true HUMAN form is much different than a humanoid form in terms of TiH canon so it's important to understand that. Y1 students are limited and can only take 1 alternative form.

FEAR- Tainted Fang- she throws a small hallucinogenic cloud at her enemies.
^All you need/should need. By making it more complex, adding caveats, you're doing yourself more of a disservice than a favor. Simple is best with FEAR attacks. If things get better over time that's fine, but all of that is flavor and should factor into her actual ATTACK. The plans of development are fine, but better as sidenotes/things that wouldn't alter the actualy attack? If that makes sense.

Other-
There are about.. 3-4 characters that either go by variations of Infinity/Fin/Fini etc, nothing barring, but worth considering.

Her personality is lacking in the sense it shows more actions and reactions of things she does rather than who she is and how she is- How is she X, What draws people to her, what drives them away? Remove physical or 'action' aspects, (such as her accidental hallucinogenics) and look at her as a character. Ask the who, what, where why and how.
If she is creative- what are the positives and negatives of this?
List things if that helps! Or, make each trait one that plays into a chain.

By removing the physical actions/reactions you can get a better grasp on what make her function internally THEN how that alters her interactions externally.

Hope this helps you~!
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 8:19 pm
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Thank you for taking the time to do a crit for me... I've tried to break it down/use it especially in regards to her personality -- I really, really appreciate the help.

Thank you -- again.  

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