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JimAboo

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Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 2:42 am


	http://joshxasman115.deviantart.com/ Read The Battle of Jimmy's first there is a second one in there called At Dawn if you want to read that too.

Posted: Tue May 20, 2014 8:59 am


	Sorry it took so long for me to get around to reading your story. I like it. The only thing I can think of to make it better would be to fix the misspellings like took instead of toke. Lastly, is the Zorro you refer to from the One Piece anime or the early California history?

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JimAboo

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Posted: Wed May 21, 2014 1:59 pm


	longaps Sorry it took so long for me to get around to reading your story. I like it. The only thing I can think of to make it better would be to fix the misspellings like took instead of toke. Lastly, is the Zorro you refer to from the One Piece anime or the early California history? Yeah I am working on it thanks though.