Welcome to Gaia! ::

THIS IS HALLOWEEN

Back to Guilds

WHERE IT IS ALWAYS HALLOWEEN (and sometimes exams) 

Tags: Halloween, Demons, Monsters, Roleplay, Academy 

Reply { Halloween Subspace } --- Quests and character approval
[Q] Lori the Demon! - Open to Crits!

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Leopleuradon

Eloquent Hunter

PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2014 10:09 pm
AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM
User Image
Name: Lori Cross
Nicknames: You can just call her Lori
Gender: Female
Age: 15 by all appearances, she's not about to give her real age away.

Faction: Demon
Race: Succubus

Natural Ability:
- Charisma: This species has a natural boost in charisma, and seductive lure. Succubuses/Incubses need people to naturally be around them, because of their need to feed, so a natural boost in charisma/attraction to others helps.


Personality:
"Anything can go right!" - Lori is an extremely optimistic person, she had been since birth. Being of a higher social class, she's never really had anyone tell her there was something she couldn't do. And as a result, she doesn't think anything is out of her reach. She knows that if she works hard enough at something, then things will work out. If a situation looks like it's going to shortly become impossible, she knows to take a deep breathe and figure out a way to turn it around. She knows how to see the good in the bad.
"Let's have a good time!" - Fun, fun, and more fun! This girl knows how to entertain herself. She absolutely hates to sit around and she gets impatient during some of her longer classes. She wants to constantly be on the move and she tends to be spontaneous with her actions. One thing is for sure, you're never going to be bored with her around. The best way to put it? She's kinda whimsical.
"I get things done!" - Once Lori sets her mind to something, she'll get it done no matter what it takes. She's been like this ever since she was a child and has always been quite cunning at getting exactly what she wants. She can be a bit manipulating in this aspect. She'll use her tenacity to get just about anything done.

"Sure I'll help, for a price!" - Lori is a demon after all, of course she can use her abilities to fulfill low-level contracts. However, no matter how sweet she is to be around it is a serious business. She's not going to go around helping just anyone for free. She might step in to help without your permission, but she's still going to ask for a price afterwards. Her actions are never.
"I'm a demon, don't forget that!" - I wouldn't suggest talking down to Lori, she's extremely prideful of where she comes form and what she is. She doesn't take nicely to those who are rude to her and she really doesn't like to follow orders that are barked into her face. She has more dignity than that and sometimes it clashes with others when it comes to teamwork.
"Hey, what's that?" - Lori has a deep curiosity for just about everything. She doesn't exactly study things using books, instead she tries to experience things in person. On top of this, she just loves to cause mischief for other people. This isn't always on a large scale, you might just find that your bookmark isn't in it's book anymore! How sad, time to find your page again, spoiler alert!

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Lori comes form a family where it's expected for her to succeed and where better to do that than the best school around? One things for certain, she's not there just to fool around, although it may seem like that when you first get to know her.

FEAR Ability:
Heart Sting - Lori uses her tail to lash out and string her target, piercing any barrier they might have in place. It has the effect of a mild poison on the target.
        [The Tainted Fang]
        Tier One
        Dice: 3d4
        First Dice:
        xxxxx 1-3: Miss
        xxxxx 4: Success!
        Second Dice:
        xxxxx 1-3: Target suffers 1 damage for [third dice] rounds.
        xxxxx 4: Target suffers 2 damage for [third dice] rounds.
        Third Dice:
        xxxxx Determines how many turns the effect lasts.
        Potential Max Damage: 8


Physical Description:

Eye Colour: Purple
Hair Colour/Style: Hair is a very pale white, more creamy than just a plain white. It's long and a mix of random curls and mess, she tries to straighten it, but it never really stays tamed.
Skin Colour: Pale, almost like she's a vampire!
Clothing Style/Colours: Something like this - She dresses like a fine upperclass demon, with the exception of the spiked bands around her arms to give her a little bit of a dangerous touch.
Extra: Red batlike wings, black horns, a red spiked tail, and pointy ears.
References: Lori! | Another good Example | Hair Style ref.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2014 10:21 pm
Going to save an extra post for more info at some point. c:  

Leopleuradon

Eloquent Hunter


Leopleuradon

Eloquent Hunter

PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2014 12:17 pm
User Image

Bumping this with cute Lori art! QAQ  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 18, 2014 7:56 am
Lori is really cute!

Her Nat & FEAR abilities seem to be just fine.

I love her go-to attitude!
You mention that she doesn't do any favors for free, how about with friends? How is she with other people if she always expects payment, and has a streak of trouble in her?
The 'power-scale' for the students is very low. Will she take on contracts that may be slightly out of her grasp? Is she magically gifted or does she just fulfill things through her own hard work? Does money play some part in getting things done? I was just curious, since demonic contracts were specifically mentioned, how she plans to achieve her ends. If someone wants to have all their homework done, will she do it herself or pay some minion? Would she be capable of pulling people into her charge with just her personality?

Overall, I don't find much fault in her but I thought these may be good points to think on, and if you have any demon specific species questions (you mentioned being NEW *excite*) feel free to post in the shop Q&A.  

iloveyouDIE

Unstoppable OTP

27,425 Points
  • Falling For You 25
  • Married 100
  • OTP 200
Reply
{ Halloween Subspace } --- Quests and character approval

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum