[Q] Rinko Emiya, Life Hunter [Ready/Crits]

[LeavingGO]

DEUS EX MACHINA PERSONNEL FORM

The Hunter
Name: Rinko Emiya
Nicknames: None yet. Will respond to any variation of her given name, just don't use her family name. She'll get mopey.
Gender: Female
Age: 22
Category: Life - Related to "research", including research specifically OF Halloween, its specimens, and ultimately Fear and the abilities of Fear and Hunters.

The Weapon
Name: Yomi
Nicknames: None yet
Type of Weapon: Cane Sword
Former species of weapon: Sea Serpent
Gender: Male

Personality - Rinko:

• Bookworm, has a head for random information.
  
• Skittish, hyper aware. Hard to sneak up on. Gets chronic headaches due to this though.
  
• With the loss of her original glasses, now half-blind. Also blinded in the left eye. Tired of eyepatches. Will get a monocle to handle her blindness later.
  
• An introvert, doesn't like interacting with people. A frequent daydreamer, prefers quiet spots.
  
• Has a soft spot for juniors & kids, reminds her of her various cousins.
  
• Due to the lost of the personas holding together her lighter & darker memories, only her neutral memories are intact & complete. The others are faded at best, patchy at worse.

Why did your human character choose to become a Hunter?
A survivor of Day Zero, Rinko wants to stay close to the others of her Faction family that are still around.

Personality - Yomi:

• Short attention span. Can't take things seriously, like, at all.
  
• A chatterbox, natters about anything & everything. Usually tuned out by Rinko. Will sulk if ignored too often.
  
• Almost always cheerful. Easily pleased with things he likes, particularly food. Bored of seafood, but every other food is fair game.

Weapon Ability: Tainted Fang - Yomi's subspecies make up for their smaller size with a venomous bite.

Physical Description - Rinko:
Eye Colour: Green. Left eye is faded green due to scarring.
Hair Colour/Style: Sandy blond, usually tied in a high ponytail.
Skin Colour: Asian tanned.
Clothing Style/Colours: Standard uniform with the Life sigil on the back, with a hood & long enough sleeves to cover her palms. Wears a light blue scarf around her neck. Prefers wearing long-sleeved baggy/comfy top under her uniform & jeans. Wears her #16 Emerston Jersey restyled as a hip scarf.
Extra: Half-Asian, about 1.7m in height. Claw-shaped scars over left eye.
References:
Day Zero Rinko from Avatar Maker

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Day Zero Rinko

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Design for Life Hunter uniform

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[kuropeco]

Hi Emiya! Welcome to TiH!

Weapon looks fine!

Just one or two things on personality: as a note, that hair-trigger reflex / attacking allies could result in some IC consequences, so if you're all right with that, it's fine!

Her being both half-blind and wounded in her eye makes her! a liability at present - it's perfectly okay to have eye injuries (Seussi's hunter Finn has an eyepatch, and my hunter Gale is partially blind in one eye), but they still have a significant amount of range / ability because of their status in Deus - meaning they have more experience! So it might be a little too out there to have her so severely blinded at the start, maybe she could pick up some glasses while at Deus!

Yomi > Seems fun, except the weather prediction kind of wouldn't work well for an island like Deus, unfortunately! xD

Appearance > It's a little extreme - and hard - to keep her eye closed all the time, and seems rather unrealistic. She's free to have an eyepatch or a covering if necessary, however!

Just a few minor things to be tweaked, you're off to a good start! Good luck!

emiyarinko

 

[LeavingGO]

kuropeco

Thanks for the crit!

Personality: I removed the hair trigger part & changed the skittish part to also include hyper aware & the resulting chronic headaches.She'll calmed down by the time she shows up in any RP.

Half-blind: Yeah, I'm planning for Rinko to get access to either a monocle, something similar, or contact lens to deal with her eyesight.

Yomi: Weather forecast is removed. Hm, what else to make him talk about. Maybe food...

Appearance: I removed the one eye closed part, but Rinko is kind of tired of eyepatches, so no to that.