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 Posted: Fri May 29, 2020 11:52 am
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Character Name: Ikasu
Link to Profile: X
Class: Kidou Specialist
Reiatsu Level used: 25
Name: Tōbō Yokusei (Fugitive Suppression)
Description: This is the martial art that was unique to the Hi and the Fugitive Taskforce that they had controled for many generations. It was never taught at the Shinigami Academy so it is a rare art.
Type: Fighting Style
Cost: --
Effect: +3 Attack +2 Defence per every 100 Reiatsu
Duration: -
Cooldown: -
Range: Melee
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: Characters can only have 1 fighting style so only characters without a fighting style custom would be able to benefit from this, also i'm going to say that i don't think we want a fighting style that is learnable floating around so that we don't have to tell people when they try to learn it that it wouldn't stack with their own fighting style. (also fighting styles don't need a range you can just leave range blank for passive effects)
2.Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level used: 50
Name: Ryouga Gijutsu #2: Senjutsu Kansatsu (Tactical Observation)
Description: This is a hard light display that pops up whenever he wants and shows him things that are going on that are within the Dimension that he is already in.
Type: Tactical
Cost: -
Effect: Allows him to observe almost anything that is going on within the realm that he is currently in. If his Clarity +10 is greater than the custom level of an effect that would prevent him from observing he can still observe regardless of that effect. Can be learned by seated shinigami of any division or any shinigami of 2nd, 3rd, or 12th division for 500 words.
Duration: -
Cooldown: -
Range: Current Dimension
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: What exactly are you comparing to his Clarity + 10? i'm not sure this even needs a comparison at all i moved the learning bit down to the effect because i just noticed it.
2.Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level used: 75
Name: Ryouga Gijutsu #3: Hi Hi Hi (Fire Ice Hail)
Description: When spoken aloud it sounds like you are giggling as in Hee hee hee. It is perhaps a laughing matter to those who use this, but no laughing matter as hail pummels the target and clings to them, forming a hot ice around them which culminates in a corrosive burst of flames.
Type: Attack
Cost: 2 SE
Effect: Target gets coated in an icy slush that burns on contact and then erupts into hellish flames causing intense pain and serious injuries. Attack Power = SP+10 that is both Ice/Fire element. Afflicted target takes +5 Damage from Ice/Fire attacks for 2 posts. May be learned from Ikasu for 500 words.
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 1 Post
Range: Topic
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: you didn't define the attack's speed, also i moved the may be learned part from the description to the effect (for future reference please put the custom being learnable in the effect so that it isn't missed if someone just looks at the effect) (also ranges for ranged attacks are in feet or meters tho they don't actually matter much and are mostly just flavor.)
2.Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level used: 100
Name: Chemical Cannon
Description: The user pulls out a small box with a button which upon being pressed turns into a shoulder mounted bazooka which spits bombs of spiritual acid that eventually melt through defenses.
Type: Attack
Cost: 4 SE
Effect: Attack Speed = Speed +5. Attack Power = Spirit Power - If the user's SP is higher than the target's defense. It deals 15 Damage that bypasses defense. A character may purchase a copy of this custom as a PA for 2,500 Ryo. Must rp acquiring it from Ikasu.
Duration: --
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Range: Topic
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: 12000 Ryo is way too high a cost for other characters to learn (it's the equivalent of 6000 words) and I moved the text saying it can be purchased to the effect (also ranges for ranged attacks are in feet or meters tho they don't actually matter much and are mostly just flavor.)
2.Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level used: 125
Name: Saisei Hyōtan (Regeneration Gourd)
Description: Of Ikasu's many flasks, this is his healing gourd. Caution: Heals only HP. May cause flatulence, belching, or bad breath.
Type: Healing
Cost: 5 SE
Effect: Heals HP = (10% of Casters SP) +25. Other characters can buy it from him for 2500 ryo
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: 3 Turns
Range: Self
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: Healing a fatal wound "costs" 100 levels of the custom's power so if you wanted to keep the healing up to fatal wounds effect the HP healed would have to be lowered to (10% of Casters SP) +5, also 10000 Ryo is again too high a cost
2.Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level used: 150
Name: Ryouga Gijutsu #5: Unarigoe Kasai (Hailstorm Firestorm)
Description: The user will make the same motions as one who is drawing back an arrow and then points the outer fist toward the skies. 'Sora shita ni mukemasu! Nakisakebu shobatsu suru kōri no yari! Ryouga Gijutsu #5: Unarigoe Kasai!' (Skies cast down! Hail down ice spears to punish! Ryouga Gijutsu #5: Unarigoe Kasai!). The sky will cast down great burning ice spears to impale the target or targets.
Type: Attack
Cost: 4 SE + 1 SE per target beyond the first one
Effect: Great spear shaped hail stones fall from the sky and impale those chosen as the targets. Can target 1 person per 100 Reiatsu of the Caster. [Min 1] Attack Speed = Caster's Speed. Attack Power = Caster's Spirit Power+30. Can be learned from Ikasu for 1000 words.
Duration: --
Cooldown: 1 Post
Range: Topic
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1. Guru Approved
Comments: I changed "those affected by the AOE. Targets 1 person per 100 Reiatsu of the Caster." to "those chosen as the targets. Can target 1 person per 100 Reiatsu of the Caster. [Min 1]"
2.Approved - Bandit
Comments:
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 11:55 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2020 6:25 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2020 11:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2020 2:25 pm
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Character Name: Kazuki Muramasa
Link to Profile: 11th Division Unionist
Reiatsu Level: 275
Name: Shunko: Eternal Shunko
Description: By using his wind element, Kazuki can cycle the excess energy from [Shunko] back into himself. This allows him to hold the form almost indefinitely. It also creates the image of drake-like wings around him as [Shunko]'s energy flows around him.
Type: Support
Cost: ---
Effect: Reduces the cost of [Shunko] to 1 SE [Maintain]; while removing the duration limit. This also changes the name to [Eternal Shunko], and grants has its power based on the user's [Spd+SP].
Duration: ---
Cool-down: ---
Range: ---
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1.Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level: 300
Name: Assault Rain
Description: A powerful barrage of punches and kicks delivered in such a way it makes it harder for the opponent to keep up with his movements.
Type: Physical Offensive
Cost: 5 SE
Effect: Can only be used after [C-c-c-combo Breaker!] or [Blitz Assault] is used. Attack Speed is Kazuki's Spd +40, with a power of his Str. This attack reduces the opponent's by 10 if they have less Spd than his own Attack Speed. Once used; Kazuki is capable of following up with [Power Geyser] this post.
Duration: ---
Cool-down: 2 posts
Range: Melee
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1.Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level: 325
Name: Power Geyser
Description: Much in the same vein as [Power Wave], Kazuki smashes his hand into ground sending a surge of energy after the opponent; this energy erupts out from underneath them.
Type: Physical Offense
Cost: 5 SE
Effect: Can only be used after [Assault Rain] is used. Attack Speed is equal to his Spd +25, and has a power of his Str +40.
Duration: ---
Cool-down: 2 post
Range: 20 ft
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1.Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Bandit
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Reiatsu Level: 350
Name: Shunko: Atmospheric Pressure Cannon
Description: Kazuki creates a fusion between wind and electrical elements from both of his arms into a pressurized burst of magnetized static electricity. This attack causes his hair to stand on end during his forming of it, creating an almost shonen power-up type look before it is unleashed, weighing down anything metallic in it's path and electrocuting anything touching it.
Type: Spiritual Offensive
Cost: 8 SE
Effect: A straight line attack aimed at up to three targets directly in front of Kazuki. The attack has a Speed = to his Movement Speed+20 and a Power = to his Shunko Stat+20. Those wielding weapons [Advanced grade] or wearing Armor [Advanced Grade] have their stats and abilities [Doesnt cancel Release Bonuses, or Zanpakuto Release Abilities] granted from them negated unless they have more Intelligence than his Spirit Power+30. This effect is triggered even if the attack is blocked or dodged for 1 post, or 3 posts if it hits.
Duration: - See effect
Cool-down: 3 Posts
Range: 120 Ft.
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1.Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Bandit
Comments:
Reiatsu Level: 375
Name: Shunko: Raiji Drake
Description: Kazuki's advancement of Shunko where his dual elements meet and merge. Lighting crackling over his form almost as if scales as his winds form his wings once more.
Type: Support
Cost: 8 SE [Activation]; 4 SE [Maintain]
Effect: While active Kazuki's Movement Speed and Defensive Power are equal to his [Shunko/Eternal Shunko] +30.
Duration: 5 posts; +1 post per 200 Rei
Cool-down: Once per fight
Range: ---
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1.Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Bandit
Comments:
Reiatsu Level: 400
Name: Fighting Spirit: Mastery of Self
Description: One is only as good as their spirit in a fight, those that falter are doomed to fall. Kazuki is a master of his own fighting spirit and shows it even in the thick of combat.
Type: Support
Cost: 7 SE [per Use]
Effect: When targeted by a Strength comparison; Kazuki can use his [Shunko/Eternal Shunko] +60 in the place of his Strength.
Duration: ---
Cool-down: ---
Range: ---
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1.Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Bandit
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2020 1:31 pm
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Character Name: Florian the Gardener
Link to Profile:
Class: Shinobi-Gemisht
Reiatsu Level used: 25
Name: Peaceful Composure
Description: Florian does not like violence, and his idea of combat is trying not to get hit.
Type: FS
Action(s) Used:
Cost:
Effect: +5 Defense per level
Duration:
Cool-down:
Range:
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1. Nep - Stamp of Approval 
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2. Guru Approved
Comments:
Character Name: Florian the Gardener
Link to Profile:
Class: Shinobi-Gemisht
Reiatsu Level used: 50
Name: Farsight Tea
Description: Florian can prepare a tea that evokes euphoria in the drinker. In addition, they can, if they enter a meditative state while under the effects of the tea, see into other topics, even ones on other planes, as long as they would normally have access to those areas, or have been there before. It takes a full post outside of combat to achieve a meditative state sufficient for the clairvoyance.
Type:
Action(s) Used:
Cost: 2 SE for the far sight
Effect: above
Duration: The effects last for up to 5 posts
Cool-down: 3 posts
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Nep - Stamp of Approval
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2. Guru Approved
Comments:
Character Name: Florian the Gardener
Link to Profile:
Class: Shinobi-Gemisht
Reiatsu Level used: 75
Name: Skillful Preparation
Description: Florian is very skilled at preparing his plants into various concotions. He can do so quickly with a minimum of materials and supplies.
Type: creation/augment
Action(s) Used:
Cost: 5SE added to the cost of the poison or tea
Effect: Florian can prepare plants into teas and poisons (made with other abilities). It takes him 1 post to prepare a concoction as long as he has the materials necessary to prepare it. Teas must be drank to take effect, and poisons are applied to weapons and take effect when that weapon damages an opponent. For a poison to take effect, an opponent must have less Stamina than Florian’s SP+10 at the time he creates the poison.
Duration: prepared teas or poisons last until they are consumed/used, poison loses it's effectiveness after 5 posts if unused
Cool-down:can prepare 1 dose per post
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Nep - Stamp of Approval
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2. Guru Approved
Comments:
Character Name: Florian the Gardener
Link to Profile:
Class: Shinobi-Gemisht
Reiatsu Level used: 100
Name: Distilled Concoction
Description: Florian can take some extra time in creating a potion or a tea, making them more potent with their effects.
Type: augment
Action(s) Used:
Cost: +10 SE to the cost of the
Effect: Florian can pay the cost and take an extra post in creating a poison or tea. In doing so, the effects are enhanced by +20 to the buff, debuff, damage, comparison etc (only 1 parameter if the ability has more than one). This effect lasts until the potion is consumed.
Duration: adds an additional post to the creation of the potion
Cool-down: once per 2 posts
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Nep - Stamp of Approval
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2. Guru Approved
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2020 1:49 pm
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Character Name:Shinobu Amagi
Link to Profile:Shinobu
Class:Ominyoji Gemhist
Reiatsu Level used:25
Name:Purification Strike
Description:This is a fighting style that utilizes the style of martial arts with the power of Purification. Shinobu uses a palm strike and sends a burst of purified reiatsu towards the target.
Type:Fighting Style
Action(s) Used:
Cost:
Effect:+5 attack power to offensive actions with an additional +5 when the style improves with a cap at +50.
Duration:
Cool-down:NA
Range:Close range
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: If this is is meant to be an actual fighting style please look at the effect fighting styles are suppose to have in the guide for customs that is the first post in this thread
2. Approved - Jake
Comments:
Quote: Guru Question - Are you intentionally skipping your lv 50 custom? or did you forget to put one here?
Character Name:Shinobu Amagi
Link to Profile:Shinobu
Class:Ominyoji Gemhist
Reiatsu Level used:75
Name: Purity Augmentation
Description:As a preistiess Shinobu has an ability to augment weapons and spirit weapons in an Aura of purple purified Reiatsu. To give it a boost of damage
Type:Passive
Action(s) Used:
Cost:2 SE
Effect:adds +15 to an attack's attack power
Duration:
Cool-down:
Range:
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1. Guru Approved
Comments:I reworked this into what I assume you were trying to do. (augments are not passives. augments are actively used during your post, also i cut down the cost because you had it too high [check the guide in the beginning of this thread for the range of costs customs of certain levels should generally be in] If you wanted to make this a passive please put passive into the type rather than augment and let me know so i can rereview this custom as a passive if you change it)
2. Approved - Jake
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Character Name:Shinobu Amagi
Link to Profile:Shinobu
Class:Ominyoji Gemhist
Reiatsu Level used:100
Name: Divine Storm
Description:Shinobu Fires A purified arrow and then the arrow splits into a heavy barrage.
Type:Attack
Cost:4 se
Effect: Fires an arrow with Attack Power equal to her Spirit Power +20 and Attack Speed equal to her Speed
Duration:NA
Cool-down:1 post
Range:50 feet
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments:this is too powerful for a lv 100 custom the +20 must be applied to either attack power or attack speed or split between the 2 (also again the cost is way too high) I tweaked the wording and cost
2. Approved - Jake
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Quote: I also fixed your coding sense you didn't have the ] on the end of a number of your [ /quote ]s
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2020 5:18 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2020 3:26 pm
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Character Name: Odric Kaylen Eldeghast
Link to Profile: Hobo Mage
Class: Shinigami
Reiatsu Level used: 25
Name: Destructive Casting
Description: Odric tends to lean in to the aggressive and offense with Kido, prefering to demolish an opponent rather than defend himself.
Type: Fighting Style
Action(s) Used: --
Cost: --
Effect: An offensive style of martial arts is one that allows the user to focus all of their energies into their attacks, be it what ever means. Users of Offensive Martial Arts style gain +5 power to offensive actions they take during fights. This bonus increases by +5 each time the style improves (Cap of +50).
Duration: --
Cool-down: --
Range: --
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments:
2. Approved - Jake
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 50
Name: Advanced Kido Casting
Description: Odric has spent nearly all of his time focusing on training his ability in kido, almost to the exclusion of all else. When he casts kido, he is able to cast faster than others could cast the same kido.
Type: Augment
Action(s) Used: Augment
Cost: 1 SE
Effect: Increases the attack speed of the kido he augments by +10.
Duration: --
Cool-down: --
Range: --
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: I lowered the cost to 1 SE it's a little weak at 2 SE, but i'll be watching to see if it ends up being to powerful at 1 cost and might raise it back if it ends up being too good at 1 SE.
2. Approved - Jake
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Reiatsu Level used: 75
Name: Spirit Shield
Description: Odric creates a shield of kido in front of him to block an attack.
Type: Block
Action(s) Used: Defensive
Cost: 2 SE
Effect: Increases his defensive power by 15 against a single attack.
Duration: --
Cool-down: 1 Post
Range: --
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: I raised the cost to 2 SE
2. Approved - Jake
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Reiatsu Level used: 100
Name: Understanding of Kido
Description: Odric has spent nearly all of his time focused on training and learning kido. This has let him learn how to cast kido without expending as much energy. In addition, his constant "borrowing" of books on kido has allowed him to learn and master kido outside of the formal training areas, except at a slower rate than normal.
Type: Passive
Action(s) Used: --
Cost: --
Effect: Odric reduces the SE cost of all Kido he casts by 3 SE (but to no less than 1 SE). In addition, he can learn kido outside of training areas at a +300 cost.
Duration: --
Cool-down: --
Range: --
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Guru Approved
Comments: I clarified the wording for you and cut the redundant part about the cost reduction taking place after any cost increases because all reductions take place after increases by default.
2. Approved - Jake
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Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2020 4:40 pm
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Character Name: Tyrel the Chosen
Link to Profile:
Class: Vendereich
Reiatsu Level used: 25
Name:Way of the Holy Blade
Description:
Type: FS
Action(s) Used: +2 Defense and +3 Attack per level.
Cost:
Effect:
Duration:
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Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 50
Name: Detect Good/Evil
Description: Tyrael can smell a hollow or a shinigami from a far distance. Their presence is immediately obvious to him.
Type:
Action(s) Used:passive
Cost:
Effect: A hollow or shinigami who comes within a mile of Tyrael is immeiately noticed by him unless they have 10 more SP than Tyrael, and a technique to hide their presence. Otherwise, Tyrael is aware of their presence (but not their precise location)
Duration:
Cool-down:
Range: same thread
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 75
Name: Righteous Deflection
Description: Tyraels blade is anointed by the will of god. Attacks aimed at Tyrael are simply swatted away. Tyrael’s blade also serves as his shield
Type: parry
Action(s) Used: attack
Cost: 2 SE
Effect: Tyrael can defend himself with his blade, literally attacking the attack itself, and deflecting it. When de does so, the power of his own attack is subtracted from the power of the incoming attack, and the remaining damage, if any, is applied to Tyrael’s defense as normal
Duration:
Cool-down: once per post
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 100
Name: Perform Miracle
Description: Tyrael has seen the work of angels, the miracles performed by those kind spirits who come down from the heavens to purify the souls of the wicked, though they be wicked themselves. He has learned to perform miracles similar to theirs, a gift given to him to aid him in his mission.
Type:
Action(s) Used:
Cost:
Effect: Tyrael can learn Base Shinigami techniques, as long as they are not division specific
Duration:
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Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 125
Name: Receptive Disciple
Description: Tyrael is always open to learn the lessons God wishes to teach him. He can be anywhere, doing anything, and recieve his word, learning new things he had not known before.
Type:
Action(s) Used:
Cost: +300 words
Effect: Tyrael can learn techniques outside of their appropriate threads, so long as he has access to the techniques.
Duration:
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Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 150
Name: Supernatural Swiftness
Description:
Type: augment
Action(s) Used: augment
Cost: 3 SE
Effect: Tyrael can increase his attack speed by +30
Duration: one attack
Cool-down: once per post
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 175
Name: Divine Sight
Description: Tyrael has supernatural senses that allow him to react quickly to danger
Type:
Action(s) Used:
Cost: +1 SE [Condition]
Effect: Tyrael's clarity is (1/2 SP) + (1/2 Int) [As a Free Action: + 10]
Duration:
Cool-down:
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 200
Name: Divine Purpose
Description: Tyraels will is in accordance with the will of God. He knows that everything he does is ordained, and so he moves, and strikes with unshakable resolve.
Type: augment
Action(s) Used: augment
Cost: 6SE
Effect: Tyrael has a +40 he can apply to any comparison or to his attack speed. This is a representation of his good fortune, a result of the holy ordination of his actions.
Duration:
Cool-down: 3 posts
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 225
Name: Divine Boon
Description:
Type:
Action(s) Used:
Cost:
Effect: Tyrael’s Holy Form quincy PAs are both 200-level abilities
Duration:
Cool-down:
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 250
Name: Relentless Attack
Description: Tyrael, when filled with the fire of God’s wrath, is an unstoppable force. Nothing will stop him from purifying the world of a sinner.
Type:
Action(s) Used: +5 SE to the action
Cost: 5 SE for the extra attack
Effect: Tyrael can give up his defense action to get an extra attack action
Duration:
Cool-down: once per post
Range:
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
Comments:
2. Baron's Seal of Approval
Comments:
Reiatsu Level used: 275
Name: Mark of Sin
Description: Tyrael speaks the holy words, and a mark appears upon the head of a sinner, marking them for judgement. They find their movements slowed and their energy drained, as the weight of their own sin begins to weigh on them.
Type: Stacking Debuff
Action(s) Used: Attack
Cost: 5 SE per post
Effect: When the mark is placed upon someone with less SP than Tyrael’s SP+25, they gain 1 stack of [Sinner]. They gain another stack of [Sinner] each subsequent post after the first, up to a maximum of 5 stacks. Each stack of [Sinner] applies a cumulative -25 debuff to either an opponent’s SP or Stamina (their choice). Tyrael can mark 1 person for every 25 SP he possesses.
Duration: as long as cost is paid
Cool-down: 3 posts
Range: Sight
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
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Reiatsu Level used: 300
Name: Divine Judgement
Description: After someone has been marked for Judgement, their sins become too much for them to bear, burning them from the inside.
Type: attack
Action(s) Used: attack
Cost: 10 SE
Effect: This ability can only be used on someone who has been marked a [Sinner]. Tyrael spoeaks the holy words, and the blood of the judged begins to simmer and boil with holy wrath, damaging them from the inside. The affected opponent takes 50 HP damage per stack of [Sinner], bypassing defense.
Duration: immediate
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Range:
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1. Approved - Jake
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2. Baron's Seal of Approval
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2020 12:45 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2020 3:25 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2020 3:50 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2020 6:59 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2020 1:38 pm
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Character Name: Chouko Luna Yukimura
Link to Profile: Scout Of Destruction
Class: Powered Soul
Reiatsu Level used: 150
Name: Shadow Manifestation: Armored Butterfly Wings
Description: With a single lift of a finger, a black like aura gathers around her body and will react to any attacks coming against her. Big wings of a butter fly gather around her body, transparent as well allowing her to see through the wings as her eyes briefly while its active would have black lining around her eyes. The wings will block off any attacks and deflects them away while smothering her.
Type:Defensive
Cost: 6 SE
Effect: [Darkness] +30 to Defense, Deflects the attack away if enemy fails SP vs SP Comparison, if not able to be deflected, damage goes normally.
Duration:---
Cool-down: Three Post Cooldown
Range:Self
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Ryuu
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Character Name: Sara Ichika Ren
Link to Profile: Lotus Dancer
Class: Unionist
Reiatsu Level used: 150
Name: Once You Go Samurai, You Never Go Back
Description: Due to being a Kensei formerly, her muscles have changed through her body, hardening its own skin naturally and its physical reaction reflexes. These reflexes have been obtained through before and after, etched forever in her mind.
Type: New Clarity
Cost:----
Effect:Half Of Strength + Half Of Defense=New Clarity
Duration:---
Cool-down:----
Range:Self
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Ryuu
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Character Name: Sara Ichika Ren
Link to Profile: Lotus Dancer
Class: Unionist
Reiatsu Level used: 175
Name: Way Of The Magus
Description: Sara is very capable of lacing her simple attacks with effects of different Hado along with its power. To do this, she must say the incantation then breathe upon her Zanpakuto enhancing it with its effects and power. This allows her to use Kido in melee form without having to fire it.
Cost: 7 SE to activate, 4 SE to maintain
Effect: Can be maintained as long as the effect is paid for but will only use the Hado Kido's power set stats and only affects basic attacks. No Customs or Techniques are influenced by this technique.
Duration: as long as its paid for
Cool-down:----
Range:Self
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Ryuu
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Character Name: Sara Ichika Ren
Link to Profile: Lotus Dancer
Class: Unionist
Reiatsu Level used: 200
Name: Fused Form: Are You Prepared For This Buffet
Description: When Sara fuses with Anastasia and fusion is complete and active, they can activate a ability that buffs their body to six pack muscle level. In doing so, everyone around the fused being will feel unease about facing against this fused being and would prefer to be defeated then bashed down by this muscled form.
Type: Augment
Cost: 6 SE to activate, 4 SE to maintain
Effect: Any enemies and allies within 200 Ft, if they fail Strength vs Strength Comparison, they lose 40 Defense/Defensive Power as long as they are within the 200 Ft range of Sara. Can only be used in Fused Form.
Duration:As long as its paid
Cool-down:-----
Range:200 Ft
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Ryuu
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Character Name: Blanche Clara Estelle
Link to Profile: Mage Casting Quincy
Class: Traditional Quincy
Reiatsu Level used: 200
Name: Military Code: Battle Mage Onslaught
Description: Blanche established a new code or a new order for the future, one that takes in military branch teachings.
Type: Technique Learning
Cost:---
Effect:Able to learn Vanderich techniques
Duration:---
Cool-down:---
Range:Self
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Cass
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2. Approved - Ryuu
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Character Name:
Link to Profile: Mage Casting Quincy
Class: Traditional Quincy
Reiatsu Level used: 225
Name: White Flames Of Ywach
Description: Sara will speak a incantation upon her technique before she fires, giving the technique the white flame affect around it but truly its made of white reishi, similar to the white reishi of her Letz Still Cloak. "Father Of All Quincy, Bless This Arrow, White Flame Strike!" As soon as the incantation is done, she will fire off her technique.
Type: Augment
Cost: 5SE to activate, +5 SE cost to any technique/custom
Effect: Attack Speed=Speed +45
Duration:----
Cool-down: 4 Post Cooldown
Range: Self
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - -
1. Approved - Cass
Comments: Considering the link is to Blanche and the description fits her I'm going to say its hers despite Sara's name in the description. Please keep character names in the slot especially if your are posting multiple characters customs per post.
2. Approved - Ryuu
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