Another Poem by Me.

[Tangelo_Effect]

Depth

Here stands a broken man
with his head held low.
He believes a myth
that love can't show,
but still he tries
to send fear away
in the back of his mind;
it lives another day.
Hate is hell,
and life is love;
but in the depths of his hell
his spirit will rise above,
and still he fears
for that one day
when fate itself
will get it's way.
Hating life,
he takes the leap,
but only when the time is right;
when he knows he's in too deep.  

[GiftNinja xD]

SeniorTwinkles

Depth

Here stands a broken man
with his head held low.
He believes a myth
that love can't show,
but still he tries
to send fear away
in the back of his mind;
it lives another day.
Hate is hell,
and life is love;
but in the depths of his hell
his spirit will rise above,
and still he fears
for that one day
when fate itself
will get it's way.
Hating life,
he takes the leap,
but only when the time is right;
when he knows he's in too deep.

Wow, I really like this one. It has alot of meaning to it.
keep up the great work.

 

[Tangelo_Effect]

Hey thanks a lot. 3nodding  

[GabbySilverwood]

It was moving, and right up there with the excellence of everything else I've seen of yours.  

[Moppeh]

It was good, but I would try not to force the rhyming aspect of the poem.