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 Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 2:18 am
Okay! Here I may post pretty much All the petry I've ever written, now, it's not the best but I hope that you enjoy reading it as much writing it, and please tell me what you think, even if it sucks just let me know so I can fix it up. Here is the forst poem I'll start off with and see how it goes.
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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 2:25 am
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Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 3:25 am
Hanging on my wall
Pictures speak no words
They sing in silence
And cry as deaf
Frozen in time
No movement even slight
Yet you here a thousand things
See each gesture
Witness every moment
And feel as though it never passed
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 7:45 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 5:28 am
Thanks! It means alot, I try really hard to make everything I write good, so yeah, it means alot that you like it!
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 12:59 pm
Dragon Tails Hanging on my wall
Pictures speak no words
They sing in silence
And cry as deaf
Frozen in time
No movement even slight
Yet you here a thousand things
See each gesture
Witness every moment
And feel as though it never passed Beautiful! . eek surprised eek surprised .
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 8:30 am
I like the fact that the gallows is actually shaped vaugly like a person.
And they are both well written.
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 11:00 am
I liked them both. Good job!
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