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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:55 pm
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This is the first poem that I have considered good in any way. I think it paints a good picture and I like the structure. Feel free to criticize it and comment, ect.
A Cadence of Silence that no man can hear, A ritual at midnight, sound to a deaf ear, To summon the Magic and bring it all near, To clear the mind, erase all fear
We'll dance in the moonlight and all gather 'round. We'll parade at midnight acroos sacred ground. You can dance to the Cadence, the beat without sound. Come along with me to this place that I've found.
Come, I will show you, Or you'll never know... The Cadence of Silence, Come join the show.
Well, what do you think of it?
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:37 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:46 am
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