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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 6:30 pm


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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:27 pm


	It's simple, sweet and straightforward without being twee. I would give it an A+, I really like it heart Criticism (of any) would maybe be just a suggestion, adding a little something to make it hit a nerve? Jaikai xx

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