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The Gaian Grammar Guild is a refuge for the literate, a place for them to post and read posts without worrying about the nonsensical ones. 

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Saxophone!
Whoo!
63%
 63%  [ 7 ]
Where's my reed?
36%
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Total Votes : 11


yashajoy

 
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PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2006 6:30 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:27 pm


It's simple, sweet and straightforward without being twee. I would give it an A+, I really like it heart Criticism (of any) would maybe be just a suggestion, adding a little something to make it hit a nerve?

Jaikai
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