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Should I post more of my work? |
Yes! I wanna read more! |
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No, if you don't want to share, don't. No skin off my back. |
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Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 6:20 pm
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Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 6:26 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 2:33 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 3:46 pm
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 8:44 am
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 12:23 pm
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hapahaole .Mr. .Disco. I wouldn't necessarily just show my work to friends to disturb them, as I don't generally like to write "distrubing" work. lol, well, they're the happy go lucky people that like a good happy ending. So if my writing is more on the sad side they throw a fit. It's kinda funny to watch actually. Thanks for the comments, I may post more. Don't know if I should post old stuff, or actually force myself to write new stuff. My motivation hasn't really been up there, but we'll see.
Well, I sometimes have to force myself to write something new, even if it's just a paragraph of meaningless thought processes. I like to keep writing. When I'm away from home, I keep a small moleskin notebook in my pocket to write down random ideas.
Just keep writing! I'm 100% active here, so I'll be sure to read anything ASAP!
If you're into a darker style of writing, check out the story I recently posted in the guild entitled, "City."
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Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 9:13 am
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 7:19 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 5:39 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:35 am
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hapahaole Here's a poem I wrote Saturday. I love the last stanza, but I'm not sure how well the poem itself really works. What If Tears Were Solid?Little drops of crystal <- I don't like this metaphor for poetry. Its pretty cliche. slowly sliding down the cheek. Memorials of events within. <- This is a bit vague.I could gather them into the palm of my hand, and study each smooth pebble. <- This is smooth. Nice.Compare sizes and shapes. <- Maybe make this a one-liner? I think it'd pack more punch that way.Admire the way it bends <- What is it? The pebbles? I'm pretty sure pebbles don't bend. and plays with the light. Such beauty, in the hour of such sorrow. <- This line equals cliche. A downer compared to the meat of this poem.Little pieces of the soul <- Use a metaphor for soul. It'd be prettier. seeping out, proving it's still there. <- Calm ending. I'm not sure if that's good or bad...
You have potential. Like everyone. But this poem didn't really let it out.
Edit it up, and it'll be really good.
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Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:53 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:57 pm
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WildWildWindWhisperer Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 7:59 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 8:01 am
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WildWildWindWhisperer Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 8:48 pm
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