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 Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:16 pm
Hello this is my story-Shelter test- I would love critique of any kind and it will take a few posts but I will have the whole thing here today.
Thank you for reading and enjoy!
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:17 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:18 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:19 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:20 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:22 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:23 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:25 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:26 pm
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