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Moonwalk. Let me know.

kimika56

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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:03 pm


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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:05 am


	That was rather good. I give it a nine out of ten, and that's becasue I'm nit-picky. And what is my nit, you might ask? Well... I think it needs fewer returns, and more punctuation. By the way, maybe I just have Robert Frost on the brain, but that reminds me, somewhat, of his style.

GabbySilverwood

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