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[toshiko1]

Your thoughts?


At the end it kinda looks like Sai is flying. xP  

[What the Pho]

...It was corny...*yawns*...and short.  

[Classic Black Sheep]

I liked it. I think Sai was jumping out of a window or that was a painting or something.  

[Fangorn23]

well its some character development and obvious bonding. looks like we got ourselves a new and permanent team 7. which I like, cause at least Sai isnt trying to be a bad copy of Sasuke anymore. he's his own person. biggrin
I have to say, it was boring but necessary and I liked this chapter still.

I wonder who is "they" that are coming? ninja  

[Syndactyly]

Lord Someguy

...It was lame...*yawns*...and short.

Tch-- *spazzes* OH SO MENDOU. rolleyes

Excuse my rudeness. But... Nevermind. Pretend I was never here. surprised  

[What the Pho]

Shikalee

Lord Someguy

...It was lame...*yawns*...and short.

Tch-- *spazzes* OH SO MENDOU. rolleyes

Excuse my rudeness. But... Nevermind. Pretend I was never here. surprised

Let me rephrase. It was really short. Sai was learning about friendship. It was corny to me so sorry I didn't like it xp  

[Syndactyly]

Lord Someguy

Shikalee

Lord Someguy

...It was lame...*yawns*...and short.

Tch-- *spazzes* OH SO MENDOU. rolleyes

Excuse my rudeness. But... Nevermind. Pretend I was never here. surprised

Let me rephrase. It was really short. Sai was learning about friendship. It was corny to me so sorry I didn't like it xp

I was referring to how you said it.

Anyways, no worries. I was bored by it, too.
I'm also bored by a lot, though, so I really can't tell the difference if it's really boring or not.  

[Cherrihana]

@hfdsihgfi!1`

I freaking love Sai. I loved when Naruto cried and Sakura was silently crying but telling him that crying wont help. It looked awesome how it was drawn. I don't think it was boring at all.  

[~the Love Goddess]

When I first read this chapter through, it was... tedious... but after reading it over again, I find that I quite enjoy it. It struck me as odd when Naruto started to cry... is he losing his self-confidence? That really isn't like him, or at least how he used to be. Remember, a long time ago when he preached to Inari how crying is useless... and how you shouldn't cry unless you're happy? ...

I don't like it... Something about Naruto crying just seems wrong... >>

It was very pleasing to me when Sakura was the one to say that it's useless to cry, I must admit. Somehow, that made this chapter the one where I actually realized that she's become a lot stronger... that she's grown out of her previous childishness.

And what of Sai? I'm glad that he's allowing himself to show emotions around others. I was worried that once he got back home, he would become 'emotionless' again, but obviously that isn't the case now.

This was an interesting chapter... at first glance, you'll hate it. When you look deeper, though... what it shows in the way of character development is astounding.  

[Eternal Transience]

Boring, with a waste of perfectly good coloured pages. The only part I liked was at the very beginning when Naruto and Sakura were crying. I don't like Sai as a 'good' guy. I don't like how Kishi has effectively 'replaced' Kakashi and Sasuke and made a new Team 7. Where has all the angst gone?

 

[Classic Black Sheep]

Call me crazy but I like Sai and Yamato better than Sasuke and Kakashi. ninja