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[blackrosedemise]

“Dance Alone”

A woman dances all alone

Music plays in her ear

And she doesn’t speak a word.

Her white gown flows

As she twirls around

As she listens

Without a word.

Her feet slide along

On a floor made of tears

The music keeps on playing

As she glides around the room.

The white shroud twirls around her

As she speaks of nothing heard.

She waltzes with her ghosts

While music plays

Lips sealed shut

Forever dancing alone.

 

[Pup in Fluff]

Very pretty! I love how it's simple and elegant yet still holds it's mysteries.  

[blackrosedemise]

Pup in Fluff

Very pretty! I love how it's simple and elegant yet still holds it's mysteries.

Thank you 4laugh  

[Krys_Night]

I like the way that the words flow, simple yet elegant at the same time.  

[blackrosedemise]

Krys_Night

I like the way that the words flow, simple yet elegant at the same time.

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[Anneechin23]

Very Deep, depending on interpertation, I'd say that woman's had a tough life, and isolated herself.. I love it ^.^ heart  

[Pirate4Life45]

Very creative, and very well written. Good job. It's amazing, and the words flow so well I just want to keep reading it over and over. Again, well done.  

[WildWildWindWhisperer]

This is haunting within its core.
There is such deep pain and longing.

I simply drank the words into my being and awaited for more.
You have a delicious way of placing a vision into the mind and a feeling of great emotion to flow for the reader.
This is a simplistic elegance.

Thank you, for sharing this fine poetic work! smile

Later....
..............WildWildWindWhispereri