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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 3:01 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 3:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 3:15 pm
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~This is a newer version of the poem, if you want to see the old poem, I can post it! Thank you!
Dog
We found a dog. We named him dog. He was mysterious As mysterious can be. His fur so white, A brown patch on his eye. Such a cute dog!
When we brought him home, He sat in a corner, He slept in the corner. That corner was where he stayed.
But on Monday, I decided to take him on a walk. I hooked him up to his leash, And started walking. Dog, didn't budge, He didn't move a single muscle.
I looked at him with anger. He glared right back at me. It bothered me. So I placed him on the porch corner. He didn't move Is what I saw. It was quite strange.
On Wednesday I was playing outside. Dog just sat there. I looked over at him smiling, My smile turning into a frown. I hadn't realized this, But Dog was only a statue.
~DorkethSporketh
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 8:17 am
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DorkethSporketh SpringSpring is coming Boy oh boy! I just can't wait! And here is why. The snow starts melting. Grass starts to show. Maybe grow a little. The sky sends sprinkling rain That comes splashing down And hits my face. Flower buds pop up. Then the flowers bloom. Warm weather hits the area, The blue skies showing With their delightful clouds. Children are now outside. They've gone out to play. Some play in their yards, Others go for walks, Some ride their bikes, And the rest are participating In many other activities. So why don't you, Enjoy the Spring, While you can, While it's here! -Reina
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I like this. Well done! Looking forward to reading more. Thank you!
Later... ...........................WindWhisperer wink
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WildWildWindWhisperer Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 9:34 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 8:20 pm
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