Heaven or Hell

[Niji no Jojishi]

http://www.tightbeatz.com/download.php?fileid=61038

For those who don't know... I RAP!!!!  

[Graphitty-King]

The beat is aiight to me, the lyrics were good. U sound a bit funni to me, LOL Sorry, U need some more energy too. It seemed like U were just trying to get it done. Don't get it twisted though, I did like it and the middle and end were hot. How do U make Ur beats?  

[Niji no Jojishi]

Graphitty-King

The beat is aiight to me, the lyrics were good. U sound a bit funni to me, LOL Sorry, U need some more energy too. It seemed like U were just trying to get it done. Don't get it twisted though, I did like it and the middle and end were hot. How do U make Ur beats?

Fruity Loops 6... You can tell... But Look!!! I got crazy s**t... this was supposed to make you think.. not get crunk or hyphy...  

[The Tactician]

Capricious Tyrant

Graphitty-King

The beat is aiight to me, the lyrics were good. U sound a bit funni to me, LOL Sorry, U need some more energy too. It seemed like U were just trying to get it done. Don't get it twisted though, I did like it and the middle and end were hot. How do U make Ur beats?

Fruity Loops 6... You can tell... But Look!!! I got crazy s**t... this was supposed to make you think.. not get crunk or hyphy...

i could tell check this out yo, i have the audio on my cell

Beat sad Ghost)Riders in The Sky

The Ledgend of The Tactician

Tactician was a honest man
his last battle was agaisnt a worm of the sand
got his a** kicked yet still stands tall
runs back small comapared in size
he ran to attack the jaws opened wide
it seemed hed meet his demise
when he was in the jaws of death itd end his life
he let out a loud battle cry ran in guns shooting
as he was eaten alive he screamed!
ITS MY DUTY TO PLEASE THAT BOOTY!
ILL SEE WHEN I COME OUT IN LIL' POOPIES
hanging on to the jaw his mind was very active
in his pocket he noticed a laxative
he fell in dropping the chocolate
to the graboid he was quite provocative
with a instinct in the blink of an eye
the graboids bowels opended wide
i would have lied saying he didnt want out
this movement he wanted nothing to know about
slowly his foot pushes
booyaka booyaka his voice rang
bang bang bang the worm winced in pain
slashing leaving gash in his a**s
this story may make him famouse
he got out full and alive
but grenades in its but and hauled hide
from a mile away he saw the blood n guts spray
then went it seemed it was his glory day
he was so disturbed his depression couldnt be curbed
he pulled the pin on a grenade closed his mouth n eyes felt no pain
and in the winds and the plain you can still here the battlecrys
booyaka booyaka ITS MY DUTY TO PLEASE THAT BOOTY!
ILL SEE WHEN I COME OUT IN LIL' POOPIES
ITS MY DUTY TO PLEASE THAT BOOTY!
ILL SEE WHEN I COME OUT IN LIL' POOPIES

Chorus:MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE BANG BANG BANG!x3

You wouldnt understand it unless you were their xp xd 3nodding sweatdrop