I started a story over a year ago and I can't seem to finish it. I know how I want to end the story, I just can't figure out how to get there. I would appreciate it so much if you could go to it and review it with some suggestions. I am thinking about taking it down for a while until I can work on it again.

Here is the link for my page on fictionpress The story is called steel. Please feel free to read any of my other stories and review them. Thanks!