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I hope, I hope, I hope I can
love
50%
 50%  [ 2 ]
lose
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
laugh
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long
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linger
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Total Votes : 4


.Never.Forever.

PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:48 pm


I wrote this one day to go with one of my story characters. Yeah, it's short, but I'm a shortness kinda person.


I give you my heart,
Unbreakable,
Undeniable.
I give you my trust,
Indespensible,
Irresistable.
No stopping,
No slowing,
No time to think.
It's now or never, baby,
I've got no time to waste.

Is it not enough,
That I tell you I need you?
Would you take me seriously?
Could I believe
if you were to hold me
and tell me
in truth
that you loved me?

I am living
in my moment,
that does not
currently
include you.
If you
were to take me
away from the place I belong,
would you not feel guilt?

No, neither would I.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 8:44 pm


Wow.

xHAMR

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.Never.Forever.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 11:26 pm


Good wow, or bad wow?
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