Confession Confusion (KibahinaNaru)

[GuraGura]

first of all,my english isnt that good,you might see a lot of mistakes
second,its my 2nd fanfic ever
third,i just cant think of a title >.<

Nah anyway,just read,and I'd like feedback please!

„K-Kiba-kun!Please take this!“
Hinata said,while handing him a letter,she was bowing in hopes he wont see her red face.
He wondered,if Hinata wanted to tell him something,she could also just ask him.
“Uh,Whats that?”
Her face just went even redder “I…I expressed my feelings as good as I could,P-Please take it…”
“W-What???”
Now Kiba had to blush too.He totally didn’t expect that from her,for a moment he thought about it.
He does think Hinata’s quite cute ,and with a little bit more self-esteem she would be a good girlfriend,so why not?
“But how come the sudden change of mind,there must be a snag in it…” he thought
Hinata wonders what Kiba is thinking about,and continues her talking,handing her the letter again.
“Would…Would you please give this to Na…Naruto-kun!” And her blushing just went even Bigger
“Ah…yeah,I forgot that guy…”
He looked at her hopefull…red… face,closed his eyes and took a big sigh “C’mon,give me the letter,I’ll give it to him!” He took the letter and took a look at it.”
But why me?Wasn’t there anybody else to ask”
“Uh,well,I thought you and Naruto-kun are good Friends…so,I thought…”
Hinata looked down,and pointed her fingertips together as usual.
“Eh,I wouldn’t really say were friends” Hinata looked a bit upset hearing this.. “But I’ll give it to him anyway”
“Kiba-kun,Thank you so much!”
Her Face quickly went happy and bright.
“Its not often I see her face that bright …”
“Nah,anyway,I am gonna go find him,see ya!” and with that,he left her.
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[GuraGura]

allright,not much of an active forum in here xD

Kiba went along the road,looking for Naruto.
”Oi,Oji-san I want more!”
He heard this while passing by Ichiraku,of course Naruto would be there,Kiba wondered why he didn’t come to this conclusion earlier.
He entered the shop,and there sat Naruto eating a Bowl of Ramen,with a bunch of empty Bowls beside him.
“Ah,Kiba,you came to eat something?” Naruto Asked him after he sipped a Noodle.
”Eh,Actually,I wanted to see you” Kiba took the Letter out of his Pocket and gave it Naruto.
“I had to give this to you.”
“Eh?Me?” Naruto sipped another Noodle and wondered why Kiba would write him a letter.
“Just take it.I wont accept it back if you don’t take it.” Before Naruto could even ask something else,Kiba already left.
“What did Kiba want to tell me?”
He put his empty bowl of Ramen beside him to the other empty Bowls,and opened the Letter.

“Dear Naruto-kun,
I’ve always wanted to tell you something,and I believe I can finally take the courage you gave me.
I’ve always admired you for so long,you never gave up,no matter how hopeless the situation seemed.
I learned a lot from you.If I never met you,I think I still would be weak and useless.
Please meet me tomorrow afternoon,after the All-team Training on the Training ground.
I have to tell you something.
See you there,
Love,”

Naruto just sits there,lamed,too scared to read the letter again.
“Allright…I never knew I was such an Idol for Kiba,but that’s just…creepy…”
His hands were shivering.
“Here,your next Bowl,Naruto-kun”
Ayame,the Ramenlady said while handing him another Bowl of Ramen
“I’m…not hungry anymore…”
“Huh?Naruto-kun?Are you sick?” Ayame asked him worried.
“No…I am allright..” He stood up and got out of the shop,still kind of lamed.
After a while of walking,he realized that he just wasted a Free Ramen Coupon.
“Damn that Kiba,for spoiling my appetite!Tomorrow,I am gonna tell him straight that I am not interested in Boys!…And he has to invite me to a Bowl of Ramen,since I wasted it because of him!”
Some people were staring at him,wondering with whom he is talking too,as he noticed,he just went home quickly.  

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