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Niji no Jojishi

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:54 am
Set the rules since this is your arena...

oh yeah.. I gotta do this for "LG" really.. Rapper's Haven.. ******** LG...

So it's.. King vs. TYRANT!!!

Game on!

wink  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 11:31 am
Yeah aiight, um....I ain't got any ryhmes yet since I just got out of a battle. U are welcome to go first. ******** LG? I'm not from LG, LOL


-2 rounds
-Can only go up to 10 bars (20 lines)  

Graphitty-King


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 11:32 am
And just wondering why U called me out?  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:10 pm
Well you are well respected man from HHH, one from the subforum in LG Rapper's Haven. Tryna see how it is outside my turf.  

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:37 pm
I see, while in tha mean time I'll let some time go by. I won't forget this sceduled battle, I just need time for ryhmes. And I didn't realize I was popular now, LOL cool  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:58 pm
Graphitty-King
I see, while in tha mean time I'll let some time go by. I won't forget this sceduled battle, I just need time for ryhmes. And I didn't realize I was popular now, LOL cool
thx. I needed time myself.. we was holdin like a 4 way battle after me going through 2 battles and a beef and another 2 battles and an album and two mixtapes gonk but yeah.. I'll try not to forget either  

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 11:02 am
This took me an hour, LOL I went kinda serious. I like it, so here it is....



-Niggas try to take down tha parent of tha game, I see it too often
-But ******** don't see, without me they be rapless orphans

-Put ya a** in a coffi'n with tha cold ryhmes I'm cough'n (Consider cold as in when Ur sick, so Ur coughing)
-Make me feel like lips by tha way I'm gloss'n

-Lyrical guns send an instant message at chu filled wit lead
-Got tha s**t cocked and locked AIMed right at cha head

-***** Ur Rihanna is unfaithful, on my d**k last time I seen'r (Think of "Rihanna" as "girl", then U will get it)
-Best thing to <******** up a block since I seen Katrina (Katrina the storm)

-U can't miss-his-dimeanor, if U get what I mean. (Dimeanor means the way he acts and miss-dimeanor means he acts fake.)
-I clean tha floor of more dirt rapper's than Mr.Clean

-Best ryhmes ever seen, elder like HOVA (aka Jay-Z)
-Blew up tha game with a nova explosion, thought I told'ja (Nova explosion are very big and have radiation)
-Radiation verses can be deadly if witnessed to exposure
-Ya need all tha luck U can get so hit up Lil'flip 4 some leaf clovers (Lil'flip likes 4 leaf clovers)

-***** out of quarters so itz game over, too bad too sad
-But his clothes are even more discourage'n, seen less purple on tha gay flag

-But dag, can't help thats itz tha way he roll
-Bet his slot was filled more than an election poll

-But I'ma leave with one last thought before I'm gone
-Stop ryhme'n cuz U make tha rap game retarted like an extra chromosome.... xd (25 chromosomes make U mentally handicapped)  
PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 8:55 pm
Graphitty-King
This took me an hour, LOL I went kinda serious. I like it, so here it is....



-Niggas try to take down tha parent of tha game, I see it too often
-But ******** don't see, without me they be rapless orphans

-Put ya a** in a coffi'n with tha cold ryhmes I'm cough'n (Consider cold as in when Ur sick, so Ur coughing)
-Make me feel like lips by tha way I'm gloss'n

-Lyrical guns send an instant message at chu filled wit lead
-Got tha s**t cocked and locked AIMed right at cha head

-***** Ur Rihanna is unfaithful, on my d**k last time I seen'r (Think of "Rihanna" as "girl", then U will get it)
-Best thing to <******** up a block since I seen Katrina (Katrina the storm)

-U can't miss-his-dimeanor, if U get what I mean. (Dimeanor means the way he acts and miss-dimeanor means he acts fake.)
-I clean tha floor of more dirt rapper's than Mr.Clean

-Best ryhmes ever seen, elder like HOVA (aka Jay-Z)
-Blew up tha game with a nova explosion, thought I told'ja (Nova explosion are very big and have radiation)
-Radiation verses can be deadly if witnessed to exposure
-Ya need all tha luck U can get so hit up Lil'flip 4 some leaf clovers (Lil'flip likes 4 leaf clovers)

-***** out of quarters so itz game over, too bad too sad
-But his clothes are even more discourage'n, seen less purple on tha gay flag

-But dag, can't help thats itz tha way he roll
-Bet his slot was filled more than an election poll

-But I'ma leave with one last thought before I'm gone
-Stop ryhme'n cuz U make tha rap game retarted like an extra chromosome.... xd (25 chromosomes make U mentally handicapped)


I can't think of a ***** that goes as ancient he do
Last time I seen rhymes this old was readin Psalms in Hebrew

You want loose jokes? Bar for bar type of s**t?
How bout I spike ya d**k wit soda to induce coke?!?!

Big puns! Don't think ya team can hold me down
My verse will turn 'em to a Buddha screamin "Holy Cow!"

Have you seeing Deja-vu. An odd event /put more
Bullets in your dome than a Sugar Bowl audience*

Escort you to the ground have you offered to the bugs
Kick you while you down and throw salt on the slugs

Anything but handsome/ I bust one through this kid napsack
Make his parents come out the pockets scrambling for the ransom

You need no quarter back I'll keep ya change
Head and body shots... nothin but defeat remains

You want some magazines? Well ***** I'm the King Booker
Change ya name to Mya Ugly I'm Supa Fly's Nuc-ca!*

I'm stratus-minded so much flow it'll cure a well
Have you recievin more battery than Duracell

I don't think you should battle at all/ you got better chance of
Hittin if you did your job and spat at a wall***

*Sugar Bowl... Louisana Superdome
**Jimmy Super Fly Snuka
***Graffiti  

Niji no Jojishi

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:27 pm
C Teezy
Graphitty-King
This took me an hour, LOL I went kinda serious. I like it, so here it is....



-Niggas try to take down tha parent of tha game, I see it too often
-But ******** don't see, without me they be rapless orphans

-Put ya a** in a coffi'n with tha cold ryhmes I'm cough'n (Consider cold as in when Ur sick, so Ur coughing)
-Make me feel like lips by tha way I'm gloss'n

-Lyrical guns send an instant message at chu filled wit lead
-Got tha s**t cocked and locked AIMed right at cha head

-***** Ur Rihanna is unfaithful, on my d**k last time I seen'r (Think of "Rihanna" as "girl", then U will get it)
-Best thing to <******** up a block since I seen Katrina (Katrina the storm)

-U can't miss-his-dimeanor, if U get what I mean. (Dimeanor means the way he acts and miss-dimeanor means he acts fake.)
-I clean tha floor of more dirt rapper's than Mr.Clean

-Best ryhmes ever seen, elder like HOVA (aka Jay-Z)
-Blew up tha game with a nova explosion, thought I told'ja (Nova explosion are very big and have radiation)
-Radiation verses can be deadly if witnessed to exposure
-Ya need all tha luck U can get so hit up Lil'flip 4 some leaf clovers (Lil'flip likes 4 leaf clovers)

-***** out of quarters so itz game over, too bad too sad
-But his clothes are even more discourage'n, seen less purple on tha gay flag

-But dag, can't help thats itz tha way he roll
-Bet his slot was filled more than an election poll

-But I'ma leave with one last thought before I'm gone
-Stop ryhme'n cuz U make tha rap game retarted like an extra chromosome.... xd (25 chromosomes make U mentally handicapped)


I can't think of a ***** that goes as ancient he do
Last time I seen rhymes this old was readin Psalms in Hebrew

You want loose jokes? Bar for bar type of s**t?
How bout I spike ya d**k wit soda to induce coke?!?!

Big puns! Don't think ya team can hold me down
My verse will turn 'em to a Buddha screamin "Holy Cow!"

Have you seeing Deja-vu. An odd event /put more
Bullets in your dome than a Sugar Bowl audience*

Escort you to the ground have you offered to the bugs
Kick you while you down and throw salt on the slugs

Anything but handsome/ I bust one through this kid napsack
Make his parents come out the pockets scrambling for the ransom

You need no quarter back I'll keep ya change
Head and body shots... nothin but defeat remains

You want some magazines? Well ***** I'm the King Booker
Change ya name to Mya Ugly I'm Supa Fly's Nuc-ca!*

I'm stratus-minded so much flow it'll cure a well
Have you recievin more battery than Duracell

I don't think you should battle at all/ you got better chance of
Hittin if you did your job and spat at a wall***

*Sugar Bowl... Louisana Superdome
**Jimmy Super Fly Snuka
***Graffiti


LOL, nice.....Tha ryhmes I spit were lucky. I started with one bar and it turned to that. So I will actually need time for tha next round, cuz I am really out of ryhmes. But we both went hard, this is getting good. And did U like my verse?  
PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:28 pm
Some of Ur lines didn't ryhme??? LOL  

Graphitty-King


Niji no Jojishi

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 11:17 pm
Graphitty-King
Some of Ur lines didn't ryhme??? LOL
trust me it all rhymed... if you want me to explain some of em.. then I can...

hold on...

he do
Hebrew

Loose jokes- induce coke
type of s**t-spike ya d**k (yeah.. I'm very innovative)

Hold me down
Holy Cow (down and Cow is iffy.. when I say it out loud it rhymes lol)

odd event-audience (see.. when I use a "/" it means that the line is over but if you were to spit it to a beat the bar wouldn't be over so...)

Offered to the bugs-salt on the slugs (bugs and slugs... pretty obvious)

hansome-ransom (notice the "/"?)

keep ya change- defeat remains

Booker-Nuc-ca (in this one... it's an allusion to Jimmy Snuka... i.e. Snuka rhymes wit Nuc-ca.. that's why it had the funny spellin)

Cure a well-Duracell

battle at all/ spat at a wall ("/")

and yeah... your verse was good... but.. it's because your punches were like a greatest hits... Nice back then.. .old right now.. but I think that is attributed to your burnout.. so I would even listen to that right now...

but yeah.. take your time.. I was gonna wait.. then I strolled by and saw your post.. so I posted back... I got a lot on my hands as well.. so it took a min to put that together... but.. I think the next round is gonna be like Chinese New year!  
PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 11:38 pm
Year aiight, LOL Yup, spit that s**t off tha top of my head. Still dunno what U mean by "old" seeing as how I just came up with it, I never turn jokes into material cuz thats basically taking away tha work. Thats tha way I rap, still don't get tha "old" thing..... confused

Guess I am an elder like HOVA.... xd  

Graphitty-King


Niji no Jojishi

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 1:53 am
I'll do it like this...
Graphitty-King
This took me an hour, LOL I went kinda serious. I like it, so here it is....



-Niggas try to take down tha parent of tha game, I see it too often
-But ******** don't see, without me they be rapless orphans

-Put ya a** in a coffi'n with tha cold ryhmes I'm cough'n (Consider cold as in when Ur sick, so Ur coughing)
-Make me feel like lips by tha way I'm gloss'n

-Lyrical guns send an instant message at chu filled wit lead
-Got tha s**t cocked and locked AIMed right at cha head

-***** Ur Rihanna is unfaithful, on my d**k last time I seen'r (Think of "Rihanna" as "girl", then U will get it)
-Best thing to <******** up a block since I seen Katrina (Katrina the storm)

-U can't miss-his-dimeanor, if U get what I mean. (Dimeanor means the way he acts and miss-dimeanor means he acts fake.)
-I clean tha floor of more dirt rapper's than Mr.Clean

-Best ryhmes ever seen, elder like HOVA (aka Jay-Z)
-Blew up tha game with a nova explosion, thought I told'ja (Nova explosion are very big and have radiation)
-Radiation verses can be deadly if witnessed to exposure
-Ya need all tha luck U can get so hit up Lil'flip 4 some leaf clovers (Lil'flip likes 4 leaf clovers)

-***** out of quarters so itz game over, too bad too sad
-But his clothes are even more discourage'n, seen less purple on tha gay flag

-But dag, can't help thats itz tha way he roll
-Bet his slot was filled more than an election poll

-But I'ma leave with one last thought before I'm gone
-Stop ryhme'n cuz U make tha rap game retarted like an extra chromosome.... xd (25 chromosomes make U mentally handicapped)
Katrina reference... people use this a lot... the Lil Flip/ clover/ luck thing... dirt followed by callin yourself Mr. Clean... the AIM line.. I used my self... LAST YEAR.. ON AN ALBUM I MADE SO I GOTS THA AUDIO FOR ALL THE HATERS THAT DONT BELEIVE... but... stuff like that

I seen the sig pic.. and.. yeah.. I think I would be the Jay in this situation...
joke/punchline... they both have humor whether comedic, satire, or irony.. maybe all three

but yeah...

it's like some of your ideas and lines have been done or seen before

ESPECIALLY the cold and coughin thing... ESPECIALLY the parent and orphan thing.. Jay-Z did it...
Radiation/exposure thing...

other than those things.. it had potential.. but it was halted by these old ideas

oh yeah... And for God's sake, DONT SAY LYRICAL ______ at all!!!

it ain't lyrical if you say the word lyrical!

like the sig.. Lyrical guns!?!?!? just go ahead and say guns.. there lyrics anyways... it's a redundant waste of space, man  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 8:14 am
I didn't think it was redundant cuz people would think I meant real guns, get me? And um.....believe me or not. But when I said off tha top of my head, I really meant it. Never heard of what U just said (The parts involving rappers). I don't listen to battles often, except for mainstream ones, but they don't really have punchlines. Um.....I'm not sure how to rap any other way, and I don't wanna change my style, so um.......yeah? confused

(I also don't get ideas from other raps I do see here. The only way I'd do that is if I see ONE word I like and I turn it into a completely original line. See, I research words when I'm dry, then I make lines from them. Is this cheating or something cuz I don't think so....)

-And Lyrical Guns is my motto crying I like saying it, LOL  

Graphitty-King


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 8:19 am
But ******** this conversation for a minute, I wanna hear tha rest of HHH on this. Usually I don't accept votes till itz over but this is an acception, cuz I'm feel'n real shitty bout my verse now and I don't like that. So lets get some pplz in here to vote on tha s**t if U don't mind.

VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  
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