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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:47 pm
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Pale, dull, blue eyes Stare into the darkness Hoping to find What they have been searching for, For years to pass. The darkness is mind piercing. The silence is ear splitting. Everytime the eyes turn another direction, Darkness is waiting to greet them with an evil grin. Everytime they believe they have seen light, They blink and the light is gone. Everytime they close Hoping to see a picture, Hoping to see color, There is but blackness to see. Everytime the eyes close And call out for light, There is but darkness That returns the call.
I have been sitting here In this darkness Scince the day I lost What I have been looking for, For so long. Alone I have been, Sitting in this silence That has overcome my life. Everyday my strength dwindles away. Everyday my will diminishes. I fear that even before I die, I will have become nothing. Just and object in the way of life's path. Inanimate Before my body has began to decay. Still breathing, but not willingly. Forced to live on this earth, Though my soul has entered hell. I just sit here each and everyday, Trying to hold this false pride, This false smile, Though you can tell by my eyes That I am empty. Though most do not look into my eyes, They only see my face And believe I am here. They believe That I am still alive, Though all other signs Point the other way. I have already died, But I have been thrown Back into life, To live With only a thread of life remaining. No matter how much I try, No matter how many times I wish, I am forced to experience This world dwindling away Faster than my will to live. There is no longer A reason to live, For all has been destroyed. I am no longer a life, Only the living corpse Of a life that was...
I've been told this has been over done many times, but I really like this one. This is an original by me. I just want some feedback on it.
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:53 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 3:06 pm
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