Game for fun... I can't give anything away right now

[Veritas Unae_Nanashi]

I had a great idea for a game that involves grammar...

Billy the Kid Burger

So the game goes like this... using the above example, add a comma in a place to give it a different meaning. The above could be:

Billy, the kid burger (You are allowed to change the capitals to lower case and visa versa)

So here is the first one:
Eats shoots and leaves  

[Ame Yuki Kaze]

This one's too easy.

Eats, shoots and leaves.

OK here's mine.

I just can't take all the nagging yelling swearing and violence.

I know, it's not very good. *sighs*  

[Roguemagus]

I just can't take all the nagging, yelling "Swearing and violence".

How about:

Children keep off the lawn.  

[Masamune no Hi]

Children, keep off the lawn.

Death to the Salad Eaters Guild!  

[2_demonic_fuuckers]

Eats Shoots, and leaves

(Shoots is a guy in my sentence)  

[Veritas Unae_Nanashi]

OK, since he didn't write a sentence I'll take the previous one...

Death to the salad, Eaters Guild

question idea We have been destroyed by Pie William The Evil One

add 2  

[Angel80272]

We have been destroyed by pie, William The Evil One.

Nemonthep the Defiled and Rotting  

[lilchibitori]

Nemonthep the Defiled, and Rotting

The room laid empty and when Jimmy stepped through the door he felt as if eyes were hidden in the walls.  

[Veritas Unae_Nanashi]

The room laid empty and when Jimmy stepped through the door he felt as if eyes were hidden in the walls.

wow that's hard... umm... no idea... eek  

[Smoozle]

The room laid empty and when Jimmy stepped through the door he felt as if eyes were hidden in the walls.

Um... That's hard...


P.S. I dredged up this old topic because I thought it looked like a fun game to play.  

[chrystalclear]

The room laid empty and when Jimmy stepped through the door he felt, as if eyes were hidden in the walls.

My brain feels like a mushy apple on crack. ((I don't know where that came from; I feel random, okay?))  

[FeelinShiny]

My brain feels, like a mushy apple on crack.

Would you like some shiny spoons of Jello?  

[Smoozle]

Would you, like some shiny spoons of Jello? ((As in a name))

I wish I could purchase the Moon.  

[FeelinShiny]

I, Wish, I could purchase the Moon!

There's a place in my room full of dark cheese and golden mice.