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 Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 4:11 pm
Quote: Are you tired of "txt tlk"? Do you notice the absence of apostrophes? Do you know the proper use of the Shift key? If so, sign up for the Gaian Grammar Guild and give your eyes a rest. It seems someone kicked the n00b off the keyboard and actually wrote a comprehensible and literate description for the Guild Spotlight.
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 4:17 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 4:19 pm
Finally, a great description! 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 4:41 pm
Yeah, it's what made me join the guild biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 7:05 pm
Wow... it's a welcome change from that laughable spotlight that is now on the guild's front page with a disclaimer attached to it.
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:09 pm
Between Yami and myself, we figured out how to find the guy who wrote it up, and she gave the person something to replace it with. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:36 pm
Actually, I found the original spot light description to be quite funny and it sparked my curiosity and so I joined. Hopefully my time here will improve my spelling. mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 10:19 am
Yay! Now it's actually legible. xD
But the last one was kind of funny.
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 12:34 pm
Yeah... I must admit, it was.
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 12:49 pm
It was supposed to be funny. A joke. But, nobody thought of it as a joke.
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 4:00 pm
Masamune no Hi It was supposed to be funny. A joke. But, nobody thought of it as a joke. Do you mean the first description? Here's what I thought of the first sentence. Want of talk good?I see three possible errors here. Three is an unusually high number of mistakes in a description about a literate guild, so I wondered if this could have been intentional. It could've have been done so for comic effect, some sort of an "oxymoron." Since it was advertising a literate guild, it was pretty funny to see a description with errors. Anyway, here are the mistakes I saw: arrow Of course, the "of." arrow Shouldn't it be "well" instead of "good?" arrow Isn't it more proper to start the question with "Do you..." I'm not sure about these, but that's what I assume to be the mistakes.
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 4:16 pm
I contacted the powers-that-be and performed the ritual sacrifices. Behold, a miracle has occurred. The guild is no longer being besmirched.
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:37 pm
MistuhFieryCat Masamune no Hi It was supposed to be funny. A joke. But, nobody thought of it as a joke. Do you mean the first description? Here's what I thought of the first sentence. Want of talk good?I see three possible errors here. Three is an unusually high number of mistakes in a description about a literate guild, so I wondered if this could have been intentional. It could've have been done so for comic effect, some sort of an "oxymoron." Since it was advertising a literate guild, it was pretty funny to see a description with errors. Anyway, here are the mistakes I saw: arrow Of course, the "of." arrow Shouldn't it be "well" instead of "good?" arrow Isn't it more proper to start the question with "Do you..." I'm not sure about these, but that's what I assume to be the mistakes. I think you've over used a word. razz
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:20 pm
[~~Bakky~~] MistuhFieryCat Masamune no Hi It was supposed to be funny. A joke. But, nobody thought of it as a joke. Do you mean the first description? Here's what I thought of the first sentence. Want of talk good?I see three possible errors here. Three is an unusually high number of mistakes in a description about a literate guild, so I wondered if this could have been intentional. It could've have been done so for comic effect, some sort of an "oxymoron." Since it was advertising a literate guild, it was pretty funny to see a description with errors. Anyway, here are the mistakes I saw: arrow Of course, the "of." arrow Shouldn't it be "well" instead of "good?" arrow Isn't it more proper to start the question with "Do you..." I'm not sure about these, but that's what I assume to be the mistakes. I think you've over used a word. razz Sorry. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 7:09 pm
The Fray
"She Is"
She is everything I need that I never knew I wanted
Do not get me wrong
I cannot wait for you to come home
For now, you're not here and I'm not there
It's like we're on our own
do not get me wrong; I cannot wait for you to come home; for now you're not here and I'm not there; it's like we're on our own
do not get me wrong; I cannot wait for you to come home; for now you're not here and I'm not there; it's like we're on our own
I am so glad that somebody made a new description for the guild. That n00b deserved to be kicked out of whatever department writes guild descriptions. Ha-ha.
to figure it out; consider how to find a place to stand; instead of walking away, and instead of nowhere to land
to figure it out; consider how to find a place to stand; instead of walking away, and instead of nowhere to land
To figure it out
Consider how to find a place to stand
Instead of walking away, and instead of
Nowhere to land
She is everything I want that I never knew I needed
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