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 Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 7:50 pm
Monotone.
Distort the voices,
Shield the eyes,
Sever the veins,
And muffle the cries.
Blind all the senses,
Torture the mind,
Grind their bones,
Our freedom defined.
Wage a war,
Declare a fight,
Ignore the screams,
Cry as they might.
Poison the blood,
Watch them die,
Hide behind
A malicious lie.
Pulling teeth,
Breaking bone,
Scorching flesh,
Monotone
What do you think? : /
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 10:43 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:38 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:22 am
I disagree. I think it's good. I like the rythm, and how simple and uncluttered it is.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 7:37 am
LunaticBelle I disagree. I think it's good. I like the rythm, and how simple and uncluttered it is.
Thank ypu : ]
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:19 pm
Simple, the title fits it perfectly. The flow never stopped until the end. A monotone thought! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:48 pm
Not my favored style, but I rather liked the crisp simplicity or it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:51 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:15 pm
I liked the piece. I thought it had great rhythm and rhyme to it. I found myself moving write along with it. Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
HippieMe
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:12 am
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. : ]
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