Something's Missing (please give thoughts)

[Prince Lithium]

::Something's Missing::

I feel that all
Are pushing down on me
I feel you all
Your hands on me

Why do you push
That which is different
Away with pride?
Am I that insignifigant?

Quit following the others
Join me
Be who you want to be
Show them that...
...That you're no liar

I feel it all
You pull on me
I can see it all
Your hands on me

Why pull me in
When you know
I'm ruined again?
Am I that unnoticed?

I'll never follow
Not now
All see me and smile a fake
But I know that...
That something's missing
Someone's missing the real me  

[rain-one]

This is really good. I really like how your repetition of the 'your hands on me' line makes it stand out so much. It's very well done.

I was trying to insert something clever and useful here, but I really haven't any suggestions to improve it. It's very nice the way it is. Cheers!  

[Prince Lithium]

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