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Prince Lithium

PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:13 am
::My Refuge::

A place of warmth to get away
From the chilling frost of night and day

A place a birds and buzzing bees
From the haunting screams that call me

A place of oranges as sweet as can be
From a place where all have eaten but me

A place of that smells of mom's apple pie
From the smell of death that makes me cry

A place of bright skies, blossoms, and more
From the darkness that shall tormented me before

I made this place because I lost you
It's my mind, my world, my refuge  
PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:19 am
That's quite good. From a unbiased point of view I would give it 9/10.  

LunaticBelle


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Tipsy Noob

PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 2:19 pm
It's alright. The rhyme seem a bit forced, though.  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:20 pm
bump  

Prince Lithium

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