.Hack Poem thing(creative title, huh ^-^)

[Kitkumi]

Wrote these two about ten minutes after starting G.U (I'm only about maybe half way through it now). Short little things, but poems none the less xd


Balmung, the Azure Sky.
Orca, the Azure Sea.
Lone warriors, stand strong,
In the midst of the howling wind,
Facing down The One Sin.

Snow falling like feathers,
Blood, crimson, like petals.
A waltz,
Where a misstep leads to death.

Fight, warriors.
Fight, and do the unthinkable.
Defeat the invincible,
Perform a miracle.
With skill,
With strength,
Become legends, and earn your titles,
As Descendants of Fianna.  

[Kitkumi]

The light of dawn,
Disappeared from our World,
And in the Wave’s wake,
Rests the Wave’s rebirth.

The Eight Lords,
Broken upon the stones of hope,
Wait quietly to strike;
They are together again.

Skeith returns in avengers garb,
The first of the eight.
Corbenik, the last,
In unknown mystery.

Together they form the chain,
And call the others forth.
Innis, Magus, Fidchell, Gorre, Macha, Tarvos.
Each heeds the summon, and quietly gathers.

Where is the daughter of light,
For hers was the protection we sought.
Where is the chosen of dawn,
For his was the strength we drew from.

Gone is the light,
Gone is the dawn,
Gone is the hope.
And thus, we too, are gone.  

[MizuiroMiaz]

truely amazing! If there was a poem contest on Gaia, you'd win!  

[ZamirofAngellus]

Wow! Those were so good that I almost thought you copied them from some .hack site or The Epitaph! Really good work!  

[Kitkumi]

wow, thanks so much ^-^ I was trying to imitate the Epitaph’s style because it really is a beautiful style, and I'm really glad to hear that I succeeded in that and that you guys like it.  

[Kitkumi]

Sauce-Kay

I wish I could write good poems. TTwTT

[/jealous]

lol. normally I'm no good at poems either. but I love to write, and sometimes I'm inspired to write little poems like those.  

[TheGothicDemoness]

O my gosh I love the poems *claps*  

[Kitkumi]

XxGrieverxX

Kitkumi

Sauce-Kay

I wish I could write good poems. TTwTT

[/jealous]

lol. normally I'm no good at poems either. but I love to write, and sometimes I'm inspired to write little poems like those.

They're really great. You should write a poem about Elk from .Hack.
I would totally put it in my profile.

Hmm.... Well, I guess I can give it a try ^-^ I'll see if I can come up with something for Elk.  

[RivenPanic]

Elk:
Slowly losing Mia
The first person I met here
By use of this grass

This is kind based off of the 3 Volume in the Novel Series with Black Rose and Kite. Its in Haiku form 5-7-5 (i think thats right)  

[Kitkumi]

RivenPanic

Elk:
Slowly losing Mia
The first person I met here
By use of this grass

This is kind based off of the 3 Volume in the Novel Series with Black Rose and Kite. Its in Haiku form 5-7-5 (i think thats right)

Yay! Welcome, Riv. Too bad you didn't join a week ago. You could have entered the Haiku contest going on right now! That one you made it good.