From the New Guy, A Poem of sadness, longing and vengence

[Kuroi Jofune the Pirate]

(this was written about an hour before i was wheeled into surgery, I was alone and scared)


The Pain and Burden I Bear.
By: Kuroi Jofune the Pirate

Its something i hide well
Its my journey through Hell
It weakens and strengthens me
It binds me and hides me from the world

Happiness I'll never know
Pain is all I feel
All I taste is bitterness
My tears are the lesser comfort
Can you tell me how to be happy
When all I do is suffer?

Can you tell me how deep my wounds are?
Do you honestly think your love can fix me?
Do you believe your prayers will comfort me?
Do you believe your kisses give me hope?
And Do you think your touch will lift my spirits?

Honestly, Do you think your strong enough to break my chains.....

(If you liked or didnt like this poem, drop me a line, i like to hear from people)

Kuroi Jofune the Pirate  

[engineer-of-doom]

Well, I certainly like it. 3nodding

very evocative.  

[ObscureEnigma]

Wow. What a strong piece! I adore it.  

[Sir_destructor_prp_Shezar]

the sadness runs in my veins
and it wanna stay
that is what i feel inside
and i wanna put it out.  

[Angelvince]

Both thumbs up for that ...

Just blaugh  

[Just A Fly On The Wall]

I liked it. At the end it seemed as though you were talking to someone close to you. Not anyone in general, but someone who tried to comfort you in a way. Right? sweatdrop