A new song; "Pass Away"

[Mistress Bella Muerte]

Warning: Most of my writing is very angsty and, to some, stereotypical. If you're not going to take this kind of stuff seriously and post immature comments about it, then please either don't read it, or keep it to yourself. Thanks. edit: I really would appreciate some feedback, though. ^^ heart

v.1
After all the things you've done to me
How could you blacken my name?
With vice on your lips
And fear in your eyes
That puts my own to shame
But maybe I have wronged you
Honey, I confess
That for all the things that you have done
I've never loved you less!

chorus.1
Can you see the tears in their eyes?
Can you feel their pain?
Can you feel the heart of the dead man
Breaking again and again?

v.2
Baby, you've gone to a whole new level
Perhaps seven feet is too far
Through all of the dirt and broken bones
It's hard to see those stars
But maybe it's me that's distant
Is the air that I breathe poison gas?
Slowly and secretly melting away
The bitter shield I thought would last

chorus.2
Can you see that they're doubling over
With grief ten-fold from the grave?
Look around and witness that
His love will never save!!
Can you see the tears in their eyes?
Can you feel their pain?
Can you feel the heard of the dead man
Breaking again and again?

bridge.1
Don't let me pass away
Day after aching day
Paying the price you should have paid

It is not my own to grieve
So go on and take your leave
Or turn back 'round, honey, please!
And kiss my lips again!

chorus.2

bridge.2
You know
That I know
Thank you know we shouldn't be here
Chipping away what we once had
And you know
That I know
That you know we shouldn't have said
All those awful things we said
So don't let me pass away!!

chorus.2 x 2

bridge.2  

[Mistress Bella Muerte]

Bumpage. ^^;