Alone (Part 2)

[Radio Chaos]

Physical Pain hurts on the outside.......

As the story moves on
Since you've been gone
I've been sad all along
Listening to my favorite song

I hope you don't mind
If you would be kind
Saying sorry, my question line
Saying yes, my answer to find

I say sorry a lot
but it seems forgot
I love you a lot
But my chances are shot


I know that towards the end, it starts to lose it's thought. But, I still like it!

........but emotional pain hurts everywhere

 

[Muffin Manic]

I liked the ending the whole thing had a flow that made me want to know more of what was behind your thoughts as you wrote it.! I just got the feeling that there was so much more to the story. That we don't know about! I really liked it.  

[Radio Chaos]

Thank you!  

[ahzma attack]

I really actually didn't understand a lot of it, but I liked the rhyming. That was fun. surprised