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Reply 44: Stairway to Poetry
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Aerathea

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:49 pm
~Answers~
As you open the doors of time and space
The answers of life surround you
Even the answers of the universe
Show you the way, and tell you no lies

Everything you ever wondered
Every question you ever had
Every lie you were ever told
No lies here will be said

The answer to our existence
The answers to our beliefs
The answers to what we were never told
Have now been revealed

Your life flashes before your eyes
Darkness comes before you
Now you have the answers you seek
While those that surround you have no clue  
PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:49 pm
Its for english class 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 12:46 am
Last line should be ...those who surround you...

Other than that tiny correction, I think it's very good. 3nodding  
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