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Radio Chaos

PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:23 am


It's an hour until the game
I'm nervous to the core
I can't find my courage
As the rain starts to pour

It's time to play
I'll give it all I got
The team looks determined
But I am not

As I walk onto the field
My heart starts to pound
It felt like a wrestler
Punching into the ground

As the rain continues to fall
I lose me cool
Will I miss this shot?
Will I look like a fool?

It's the final quarter
and it's up to me
To score the final goal
But it's not that easy

I kick the ball
Towards the net
And I miss the goal
This is what I get?

I worked so hard
I sweated a lot
And now I lose the game
Oh, how I wish I were shot.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 11:26 am


Quite snappy and rhymic yet lots of detail. I like it!

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Lord_Skyy

PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 7:50 am


Hah, "I wish I were shot." Good Job.
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