Lover's Song

[OptimisticallyPessimistic]

Red over pink over white
Valentine's has come overnight
Playing upon lover's dreams
Cupid strikes all who seem
To be in need of love
With his bow, white as a dove
And his arrow, red as a heart
That shoots and makes them start
Beating, fast and hard
For one day they let down guard
He makes dreamers see
All that love can or may be
Gives hope to the hopeful
And granted wishes to the wishful
As he flitters on gilded wing
And joining lovers as they sing
"Oh, what a wonderful way
To be on Valentine's Day!"

Meh.  

[Lord_Skyy]

Not bad, I think you wrote it in a hurry. It builds up to the end. Nice.  

[OptimisticallyPessimistic]

Lord_Skyy

Not bad, I think you wrote it in a hurry. It builds up to the end. Nice.

Lol. I did. I had to go to school. sweatdrop
Thanks for the comment though!!!!  

[Gachetemas]

It's great, but it should be broken into stanzas and have periods when necessary. It would be nicer to read.