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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:32 pm
Finally managed to finish a poem for Elk, at the request of XxGrieverxX (sorry it took so long, but I always have to find some sort of inspiration to write a poem, lol) Thank you to everyone you responded to my topic of "What do you think of when you think of Elk"; your ideas really helped. I may come back and redo this one though; I'm not fully happy with it. But its a start ^^


Upon the twilight hillside,
The silent angel waits;
A heart of crystal kindness,
Aglow with healing light.

His is the forgotten strength;
That which carries Dawn’s army,
And unknowingly,
He protects the Temptress.

In the beauty of fading light,
His becomes a fate divided;
Shall he strike down the Dawn,
Or will beside the chosen he fight?  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 10:45 pm
User Image Very nice.

I envy your skills in poetry. D:
 


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:09 pm
Lol. Thanks ^^  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 2:42 pm
sweetness better than any of mine  

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:15 pm
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sweetness better than any of mine


I beg to differ that. I've read your stuff. I think that you write the stuff easier than me, lol.  
PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 3:01 am
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sweetness better than any of mine


I beg to differ that. I've read your stuff. I think that you write the stuff easier than me, lol.


*shrugs* mines a pain to write...too quickly written..not thought put into it  

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